You need to get a beta and re write this story is lacking so much with details.

Listen kid, you might as well put this back to the regular EEnE fandom because I've never feel the FNAF aura in this story, where it has a horror element and suspense in some Fazzbears Pizza house.

That's all.

- RavenousYetMysterious

OH MY GOSH WHY HAVENT I SEEN THIS BEFORE! I love it!