Reviews for Death Becomes Her!
SSJ Ryo-Ohki chapter 10 . 9/21/2003
Unimaginative, trite, boring - it's been done before, and miles better. This is a rehash of an overdone genre, kiddo - and it shows.
Sprite Figwit's Fangirl chapter 5 . 3/29/2003

"and there came a large farmhouse from above, crushing her"

I will not stop laughing for a good long while from that mental image! Yet another interesting and creative way to rid the world of Sues!

Keep Writing!

rinlossien chapter 10 . 2/15/2003
You are brilliant. I laughed so hard as I read this that I spit coffee all over my monitor (and the proposal I'm supposed to be writing). I have learned my lesson:

1) Legolas and I can never be united in fanfiction (whump!)

2) It does not pay to pursue my LotR obsession while supposedly working.

Thanks for sharing!
Aislin chapter 10 . 2/12/2003
LMFAO!Holy crap that's funny *wips away a tear* thats good!Keep it up...
legolaslover09 chapter 1 . 2/12/2003
Look, I'm sorry if my fic might have offended you, and I have chosen to delete it from the site. I'm sorry if it made you feel uncomfortable or something. Once again I apologize.

technetium chapter 10 . 2/7/2003
Very cute. I especially liked how they were annoying Sauron.
AlorieBlue chapter 10 . 1/13/2003
Poor Legolas. Isn't he the number one Mary Sue victim? And poor Gandalf.

Well, this was lots of fun. It seems there really are endless ways to kill off the Mary Sues.
AlorieBlue chapter 5 . 1/13/2003
I'm thinking ruby-haired should be hyphenated. I love that it's referring to her feet.

Another she-elf. A friend of mine came up with a good definition of the term: It's lesbian elf porn, designed to be viewed by human men.
AlorieBlue chapter 3 . 1/13/2003
Arg! She-elf. Major pet peeve of mine. But this is a parody, so it's all right. I won't bore you with my specific reasons that no one should ever use the word she-elf unless they intend it in a derogatory fashion. So I guess it's okay for Mary Sue to be a she-elf.

I love evil laughter.
AlorieBlue chapter 1 . 1/13/2003
I don't usually take much interest in parodies, but I've been reading Bella's work, and she asked people to come here. And I admit I do enjoy seeing people poke fun at Mary Sues. So, on I go to the next chapter. :)

veruwen chapter 1 . 1/12/2003
dear god, this was honestly one of the funniest things i have ever read. thank god the sues set up so many ways for them to be killed. go saruman!
jedi-hobbit chapter 10 . 1/12/2003
Oh gosh this is so funny!

I liked Chapter 2.

Love it!
geminigrrl chapter 10 . 1/10/2003
Holy cow! This had me crying cause I was laughing so hard! I LOVE this! Are you going to do more with TTT? Please do! This is great!
sirius4 chapter 10 . 1/10/2003
oh my god, you are awesome! you truly rock my world, thats the coolest parody ive read here! its brilliant! do not stop! please! i beg you, write more!
Alex chapter 6 . 1/10/2003
Aaaah, finally someone found a proper use for all those pesty Mary Sues!

I salute you ;)
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