For once, he was not all façades. And thank you for that very special kiss. Great chapter.

excellent chapter!

Loved it! As always!
-Lilly

Boom. What a way to end the chapter.

I love that Kylo didnt intervene and let Rey tap into the dark side. Now they have a shuttle, are they getting off that planet?

Emotions! I wonder how that will turn out for the both of them!

Things are getting intense! Loved this chapter

Hehe, that was good! I really like how you're justifying Kylo Ren's reason for turning to the dark side. It's not as black and white for it to be. And their second kiss *heart melts* gosh, I can't get over this couple. Honestly the damn feels.
Happy Writing!

Woah! That was great. So many conflicting emotions between the two of them. I'm really interested to see how it all unravels. Looking forward for the next update! And thanks for the tip about the TFA novelization, Imma buy it now :)

WOW. After that I can't wait to see what comes next!

Le gasp! Dun dun duuuuun! :D

Oops, just read chapter 10 again and realised that they had that convo in the middle of the night rather than the morning so the man and his daughter must have been asleep lol. Loving the story :)

Glad you were able to update!

So good! Loving the slow burn of it! It makes the story better instead of rushing it. Plus, the chemistry and dialogue is so good and so true to what could actually occur. This has to be one of the best, if not the best fanfics I've read! Keep writing please! I want to know more and please make them longer if you can :)

Great to read another chapter! Thanks for continuing. I was just wondering in chapter 10 where the man and his daughter are when Kylo and Rey are talking in the morning and having a rather private conversation! Also, I seem to remember in TFA book that Kylo finds out from reading Rey's mind that she cared for Finn. It's not clear from this story if Rey found out if Finn had recovered and I think Fin. Would be in her thoughts as he is the first friend she's had. It seemed in TFA book that Finn was attracted to Rey or maybe he didn't know how he felt. Whatever the case it might be good to have him mentioned as he was a key character in the film. I also think that Kylo would be jealous / angry with any thoughts Rey had about him even if she just sees him as a real friend. Also, I'm wondering what the initial conversation might have been between Rey and Luke when they first met each other and if there was any resistance at first to the suggestion that he started training her. Also, Kylo doesn't seem to dwell on his mother much but he inherited his power from her. Something else I thought of is that Ben K is Rey's grandfather but he didn't seem to have unusual strength with the force compared to his peers but in the film, Anakin was naturally more gifted. how is it that Rey has so much strength?

He is trying so hard to convince her about something he is not embracing fully himself. And how cheeky to kiss her like that, she deserves a more refined kind of kiss. One she is completely onboard with.