Reviews for Counterbalance
SkyTraveller chapter 15 . 5/1/2016
This was such a great story! I loved how you captured the essence of Kylo Ren's internal struggle as Rey gradually coaxed the light out of him, while still staying true to his darker nature. I was hesitant with the whole Force child born from two great bloodlines thing because my heart wanted them to come together on their own and not because of a prophecy pulling the strings of fate, but you managed to sell me on it in the end. Hope there's a sequel in store and can't wait to read more from you. :)
Kallia.En chapter 15 . 4/24/2016
Wow! Thank you! To be honest, I was not expecting this end, but it makes sense... I am very grateful for this story, I loved it! Every second of it and I am sure a sequel would be really interesting! :)
delenafantasy chapter 15 . 4/18/2016
My entire being will shatter if you don't do a sequel
Hazaelxo chapter 15 . 3/24/2016
I really love how you potray kylos feelings & his whole character its literally on point i can actually see this happening as for Rey she was also on point & the whole situation just seems realistic, i really love this story its amazing
dizprincess77 chapter 15 . 3/20/2016
Loved this! Praying for a sequel! To much left to tell!
Anon chapter 15 . 3/15/2016
Read the entire fic over the course of a few days! I definitely enjoyed it. Short and sweet, and I liked the ending too as it seemed realistic instead of having them walk off into the sunset together. Would love to see a sequel in the future!
apenny12 chapter 15 . 3/12/2016
I thoroughly enjoyed this story! Binge read it all in one day! I thought the intimate scene between Kylo Ren and Rey was done very tactfully. I've read lemons and some get VERY raunchy. You made the act seem like a beautiful merging of souls, two people becoming one both through the physical act and through the Force, and I very much appreciated that scene. Without it, the ending and epilogue wouldn't have made sense. Something I've learned while writing fanfiction is that you're never going to be able to make everyone happy, but essentially, the writing is for YOU. We don't get paid to write fanfics. It's a hobby. So you tell the story you want to the best of your ability with whichever scenes you deem necessary and those who can appreciate that you are a talented writer will stick along for the ride! Excellent job. My heart twisted at the end for Ben and Rey and I would very much enjoy reading a sequel when life permits you to write more! Thank you for sharing!
Ceara Einin chapter 15 . 3/9/2016
I loved this so much. I'm addicted to the Reylo ship, and you wrote it so beautifully. Very realistic too, which I liked most of all. This is one of those stories I'd come back and read again and again. I do hope you write a sequel, I'd love to see where else you take these two!

~Ceara
Starry-Eyed Bex chapter 15 . 3/6/2016
Loved it loved it LOVED IT! Amazing Amazing AMAZING! Beautifully written and so true to the characters of TFA.

I loved the moment that Kylo stood contemplating the helmet before putting it on his head and Rey's emotional response. Kylo played his part well with the Knights, and glad he was able to think of a reason to keep Nia alive too. It's great that you included the scene from Rey's vision to tie in with the film.

The ending was heart wrenching and I really felt what the characters were going through. The response you have from readers just shows how great your descriptions are and how good this story has been! Thank you so much for sharing with us. I'm so sad this is over I really hope you write a sequel X
Reylolover chapter 15 . 3/4/2016
This story was just... perfect. I love your style of writing and the story itself. The ending is kind of epic I would love to read a sequel
pyro-pixiechik chapter 15 . 3/3/2016
Yes to a sequel please! I just read the entire thing in one sitting and it was very beautifully written. I really liked the bond between those two.
SmiCln chapter 15 . 3/3/2016
That was beautiful! When he killed the Longhorns I was like "chicken chicken mc'chicken butts! That was from her vision! Whoaaaa" fantastic job!
pachecokerry chapter 15 . 3/2/2016
I LOVED this story! So well written it really made me feel every emotion written so deeply! I love a story that can make me feel so strongly what the characters are feeling! Amazing work please write a sequel! I'd love to see Rey and Kylo Ren/Ben come together again somehow with their child!
Me chapter 15 . 3/2/2016
Love love love it! I await the sequel! Hopefully they will be together!
Me chapter 12 . 3/2/2016
Ahhh! Love this chapter!
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