Started off good that went downhill as soon as you start it on the path of rose betraying Tom.

not really sure what to say here, but i dont really care for this whole bringing forth someone else to fight for them

if rose betrays tom then she is scum

the founders fighting in the olympian army is kind of dumb, no offense

you do know that last chapter, viktors name was harrison, right?

technically rose was issued the challenge, she didnt issue the challenge

ngl, eleven years old sleeping together can be explained, if a little cringey, but bellatrix at nineteen, sleeping with the eleven year olds? yikes

tbh i would love to see rose claim some MILfs and some creatures as lovers

This is so good I hope you continue it.

I have really enjoyed this story. Dark Fem!harry stories are some of my favorites and I’m sad that two of my favorites (this story and ‘call me Moriarty by Professor Scrooge) are unfinished. This is a really good and interesting storyline and I really hope that you finish it!

How bloody powerful do ye want her to bloody be?
Cause at the moment from the descriptions it sounds as if she's a god, demigod, or the devil cause she's got a wand made out of woods that can rival the most powerful wand in existence, combined with a material that then cause the magical core to increase in power intensity and size, meaning she'd probably kill voldermort with a stinging hex

She’s a bit over powered

This was such a great story!
Thank you for your hard work in this story and, while it is really sad that there has no update for over than one year it is a story really good, certainly of the best I have read in a long time.

Wow. I'm pretty sure this is one of my favorite stories now. I really enjoyed this, and I hope that we get more if your genius. I'm hoping that Ayla is going to turn and be one of her knights as well.

Fab story

Please update... I love this story