Guest chapter 1 . 6/12
marijana.puljas chapter 1 . 5/5
I liked everything except the ending.
FireLadyFae chapter 15 . 1/18
Wow. That ending. Just... wow.
Did not see that coming. That's for sure.

I really did enjoy this story. :)
The only thing that felt off was how quick they were to say "I love you" to one another. I felt that should have been built up just a bit more.

I loved how you incorporated the new scenes into the existing ones. I felt it was done very well. :) It didn't feel out of place at all.

Ty for sharing your story! 3
FadedGloryyyChief Sosa chapter 6 . 8/2/2019
I like the concept of this story, my only problem is...I felt like you could’ve incorporated the other Characters a bit more. Also, work on placement of dialogue. Other than that Good story. Rating 7.5/10 :)