Reviews for Dancing in the Green
HalfBlood Prince chapter 1 . 9/8
The author of this fic is really cruel ! :C , leaving a fic as good as this unfinished (Onshot) is a crime. I've never seen Daphne forcing Harry to invite her to dance, although I think this would be categorized as a HAREM... :D
Lord Touch Me chapter 1 . 9/8
This version of Harry looks x Harem... XD
Apprentice Tom chapter 1 . 7/2
Nice story. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19
Hmmm, you kept mentioning Harry's Best Friend, but Ron was nowhere in the room. Why is that? Because you're deliberately erasing Ron as Harry's best friend because you're salty that Harry/Hermione isn't the canon pairing? Or that Ron/Hermione is? Seems a mite petty, don't you think?

Especially since Harry - despite "Ron being Harry's Pettigrew" (as I've seen one of the unhinged Ron-haters comment) that year - would still miss Ron the most. Something that ALL OF YOU FORGET! Hermione being split from the group in year three does not overly affect Harry all that much. Ron being split from the group this year made Harry mopey and awful to be around until Ron went "Oh, I was being dumb" and apologized.

Also, where does this preposterous 'SLIMY SLYTHERIN" thing for Ron come? At most, Ron would tell Harry to be careful, but have fun. The only people in Slytherin he actively hates are the people actively fucking with them. If Ron is complaining about Slytherins, it's Draco, Goyle, or Crabbe, with Parkinson occasionally making the list as well. Oh! And everyone in the "Inquisitorial Squad" - which should just be a given.

This is why I can't read alternate pairing fics anymore. Ron is ALWAYS reduced to "Ron dumb, Ron eat food, Ron eat with mouth full, and Ron jealous." Nobody ever remembers he STOOD on his BROKEN AND MAULED LEG to put himself between Harry and a man Ron thought was a notorious mass murderer. But no, no one ever remembers that! Oh, and even worse, they make special mention of his one feat in year one of beating McGonagall's chess and saying how it wasn't really impressive. Fuck off! Yes, it was! He was 11!
Being given a character flaw in Book 1 that he eventually realizes is affecting him and overcomes in book 4 does not make him the biggest asshole on the planet. NEWSFLASH! Being a kid and not liking school and school doesn't make him dumb, either.
mumphie chapter 1 . 4/15
Great story of friendship. Like it immensely! :)
ak chapter 1 . 2/20
bonne fic!
JimSilver chapter 1 . 9/29/2022
Oh my gosh, so beautiful! Damn I love those good feels!
Chiku11 chapter 1 . 9/27/2022
Do we have a continuation for this?
CarolWim chapter 1 . 6/13/2022
This is a truly great story. Wonderfully done.
Rishie chapter 1 . 5/28/2022
This story is excellent. I really enjoyed it, but it would be great to see a sequel, to see how they helped each other get through the war and which one Harry chooses, unless he chooses all of them.
tieflin chapter 1 . 5/22/2022
This was so good! I love how close they all became and how much they helped each other. Would love to see a sequel. And I could totally see this ending up in a pairing with any of them, a polyamorous relationship, or even neither with them all just being lifelong friends. Two of my favorite ships are Flowerpot and Haphne, though, so either of those would be great.
archangel7431 chapter 1 . 4/25/2022
good story
Jo Cook chapter 1 . 3/7/2022
whiskeylovingbibliophile chapter 1 . 3/4/2022
Boy do i wish this fanfiction had a sequel on how things go on after this in the war !
Andrew4815 chapter 1 . 3/3/2022
This is a very good shortish story, but could you please consider breaking up into ~5k word chapters? It's very difficult to navigate if you don't read it all at once, especially on mobile devices
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