|Reviews for White & Salmon|
| FrostyFruit chapter 2 . 5/30/2018
Rip...seems abandoned now. Sucks a lot too because the 1st chapter was well written.
| Mark Sevy chapter 2 . 7/21/2016
This story is really good. Plz update soon.
| apexdarkflame chapter 2 . 6/19/2016
"PLZ READ THIS I MEAN HELL I READ YOURS AIGHT ANYWAY I HAVE MANY IDEAS FOR THIS" Ok thanks man this story was one I was so looking forward to, but unfortunately you stopped updating for quite some time. I'm glad I have a better idea on the update day, thanks man keep up the good work, keep it real as well as locked. Although please don't rush this I would like to get to know the characters for once, and not have it be rushed into smut/lemon material. I would actually like it if you kept this high school au and not like mainstream, but I would love to see you make a great story on this one after it. Then I would appreciate it if you did it with the same characters but have Natsu as a hybrid of powerful beings and he needs something to keep him from TURNING: GOES ON RAMPAGE ONLY BECAUSE EARTH CAN'T WITHHOLD HIS FORM HE IS A HYBRID OF WHATEVER U WANT TO PUT TOGETHER . This material is running low on earth and he ABOSLUTLEY NEEDS MORE UNTIL HIS DATE FOR HIM TO RETURN TO HIS WORLD WITH HIS KINGDOM. HE'S THE KING AND HE IS RIGHTEOUS AND ALMIGHTY ETC. BUT HE WILL BE WAY OP AND HE'D BE SUPER COOL I KNOW I KNOW IT'S CORNY/CHEESY BUT MAKE MIRA SEE NATSU IN HIS "PRIME". I KNOW I'M ASKING A CRAP TON BUT IF YOU WANT HELP ON WRITING THIS I WILL GIVE YOU MY THOUGHTS AND SOMETHING WE ALL CAN APPRECIATE.
| GioMM chapter 1 . 1/20/2016
School NaMi? Sweeet :D
| BlackDragonShinigami chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
awesome. i'm excited for chap. 2!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2015
Nice.. Good start.. But will Natsu lose the glasses and combed down hair anytime soon?
| treeofsakuras chapter 1 . 1/1/2016
| DisasterMaster0 chapter 1 . 12/31/2015
Any story with Nami is already great, can't wait to read how their relationship goes through
| DdraigTrueEmperor9 chapter 1 . 12/31/2015
This is a Interesting AU fic and is a Nami on top of that. It was good to the how Mira and Natsu interact with each other. It was very good and Mira is a beauty no question about that. Keep the Good Work. Till the New Update and have a Happy New Year.