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GODS I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT. THIS IS THE BEST FANFIC EVER.

that was beAuTiFul

we seriously need more stories like this on fanfiction
how did I not see this story before?

I love this book its one of the best I have ever seen
pretty dark twist tho

Hey man this is a good story and all. I was just wondering this sorta reminds me of the Fire Sermon. Hey but anyway good story.

This is a great 4-shot. It feels like a story I would actually read in the dystopian section of a library. The premise of the story is so great and Percabeth is as always amazing. I haven't reviewed many stories so I have trouble showing appreciation for this story. I just want to say that I can't put in words how amazing this story is for being a 4-shot.

Ohmygod. This was Ah-MAZE-ing! Such a great story line and there was so much Percabeth (which is an absolute must, in my humble opinion!) I am so beyond glad i found this story. I was thoroughly entertained the whole way through

Love this story! I've been reading a lot of your fanfictions lately and I absolutely adore each and every one of them. Thankyou for the quality midnight entertainment because of course I don't need to sleep while reading a good fanfiction.

I know this was published a looooong time ago but still, this story is amazing. Although it only consists of 4 chapters it's already on my top 5 favorite stories in the pj fanfics, you should continue this, if not then please never stop writing.

When I found out I had accidentally missed this one, you can imagine my surprise. When I realized it was incredible, I wasn't surprised at all lol.
Dude, this was, in my humble opinion, probably my favorite FF you've ever written, and it's such a shame it took me so long to get around to it. It's short with only four chapters, but there's something unequivocally charming about this.
Despite being a dystopian setting, it's incredibly realistic in the depictions of cruelty, in the character dynamics, in emotion, and it's beautiful.
Finally, the MOST impressive thing about this entire story was the fact that Annabeth was mute for most of it. I can't even begin to fathom that. Every other aspect of your story, most writers can achieve with time and practice, but that fine balance between being too much in a character's head and too much dialogue is weighed so well in this story. The fact that Annabeth did not say one word, but we as readers could comprehend and even sympathize with her, is outstanding, and I'm kind of awe-struck at this point.

okay I know this is a lot to ask, but could you please continue on with your story? I know that one can be very lazy with updates or continuing a story, I write my own. But by writing this story, you Inspire thousands and thousands of people, some even going as far as to putting your story on a online page so everybody can see it. This story has great meanings for some people that others may not understand, but this Is very important. At least make a finishing chapter that uses as a filler, just to give the story the kick that it needs. Well, not really needs, but the chapter your fans need. So please, take the time to finish of this story, complete it at last.

- Hi from Europe

I'm not sure if you'll ever reads this, but I have something to tell you. This is a beautiful STORY AND PLOT. In most fanfictions, the plot is poorly developed and the characters are cheap. However, this is something I consider a work of art. I mean you should seriously consider turning this into a book. I honestly am at a lost of words. I've read over 100 fanfictions in my life and nothing, I mean nothing, has stood out to me as much as this one. It's amazing, fantastic, extraordinary, creative, original, and I could go on and on but then we'd be here for a while. Hehe
So anyway, just letting you know. YOU'VE GOT SOME SERIOUS WRITING TALENT. RICK RIORDAN WOULD BE JEALOUS.
So don't give up. If you love writing, take part in a career with writing. Be an author. Be an English teacher. Do whatever
JUST REMEMBERER
YOU ARE AN AMAZING, AWARD WORTHY, AUTHOR.

I don't know if I can put into words how much I love this story. It's like my hundredth time reading it and I'm always just as amazed by it as I was the first time. You're my absolute favourite author on this entire site and I really hope you keep writing!

Woww. This was cool

This is an amazing story. I love the plot a lot and I would really like to see works like these in a library and in bookstores too. I loved the way you justified the characters in this story. I stumbled upon this story today and completed it in less than 2 hours because it was damn good.
Thank you for your amazing work.