Forromir chapter 1 . 11/10/2020
Um, grammar?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2020
Your story is in desperate need of a professionally educated and highly experienced editor. You also have far too much graphic sex. If this is a typical example of your work then all of your stories need to be very rigorously edited.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2019
3 copies of the same story?
goddragonking chapter 71 . 6/2/2019
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:)
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2019
Make a Game of thrones story pls
Guest chapter 1 . 6/3/2018
CHALLENGE for a story: Fiction M: [Bran S., Daenerys T.] Romance / Aventure
Bran, arya and Sansa and go back the time is back right after killing the deserter from the night guard and recovering the wolf-baby,
thanks to the power of bran stark helped by the ancient gods to save all their family is the world of the white walker!

Bran takes the power with daenerys after saving him from his brother to pentos before the marriage of khal drogo and recovered the dragon egg!
ps: bran and fall in love with daenerys the first time who saw her in the first timeline. couple: Bran (10 years old) x daenerys (15 years old)!

The Stark family will secretly train Daenerys in Winterfell for a year to govern and fight, before sending him to essos with bran and his powers to help him forbid slavery and conquer the nine free cities : Qarth: New Ghis: Astapor / Yunkaï / Meereen/ volantis /Lys / Myr / tyrosh. she makes her possessions,
as well as Vaes Dothrak killing all the khals and Dosh khaleen with his dragon .and the Old Valyria which still has many treasures before the Scourge, like the blades in Valyrian steel and items of magical power!
His army will be composed of 8000 immaculate and one hundred thousand Dothraki and three dragon, as well as 2000 soldier-guard in training for each city of essos !
ps: bran will be betrothed to daenerys to avoid any pretender who is attracted by the power.

During this time north the stark family will fortify winterfell, moat cailin and build a fleet of 200 warships made of ironwood and 50 commercial ship built by the manderly family, with the stark emblem on the veil ,
and create a permanent army of ten thousand soldier with armor, weapon and shield in Valyrian steel, bran discovered the secret with its power !
all his grace to the gold of five millions gold dragons, as well as the ancestral sword of the lannister and targaryen which was the treasure of the pirates, that brandon to recover by attacking the stepstone with 200 men, its cover to recover daenerys has pentos during King Robert's visit to winterfell. ps: ned refuses to become the king's hand!
Bran will give both swords to Jon and Daenerys, and will sell the ancestral sword of lannister to tywin lannister.
the northern fleet asserts its supremacy at sea and devotes its time effectively to the fight against pirates, and slavery that has infected the sea.

Arya stark will kill the traitors that are: bolton, frey, jofrey, greyjoy, Alliser Thorne, Janos Slynt, Ilyn Payne, ect...

Ned stark reveals the truth to jon and all his family when brandon and sansa going back time and tells them about the future .
Ned will negotiate with Lady Olenna Tyrell the engagement of: robb and Margaery, and Loras and Sansa. Alliance Stark / Tyrell !
Ned also informs Stannis and Renly the true kinship of the children of cersei to the death of robert. ps : Robb will open a citadel for the people in the north!
Ned informed of Baelish's actions by visions of Bran's past, confused him with the lords of the North and the Val and executed him!
Ned orders his bannermens to conscript all valid men and boys aged 10 to 60 for combat training,
it also orders that all women and girls in the Northern population be trained and equipped to fight the White Walkers.

Jon will send behind the wall to make peace with mance rayder is the people-free, and make them pass the wall.
Jon does not want to become king but becomes the queen's hand. ps: couple jon x ygritte
The cassel family will inherit strong-terror from ned, the twin will give a blackfish, ned will build a castle for jon in the Stony Shore.
Bran will inherit harrenhal who will rebuild him to only half of his greatness for him and daenerys.
Syrio Forel becomes Arya Stark's Master of Arms in winterfell hired by eddard Stark !

In the crypt of winterfell at the last level there is another sword: Lightbringer, as well as a great throne with runes inscribed at the base,
and with obsidian werewolves chiseled in the knobs of the armrests, the large seat was inlaid with a dark gray metal that looked strangely similar to Valyrian steel.
The top of the back was, however, two large obsidian swords framing the head of a sculpted stone Direwolf. The Throne of the Kings of the Winter.

The king robert dies in port-real, and he is going to have a new war between the kingdoms.
Viserys Targaryen will be mad at Daenerys for having fled and Khal Drogo will send Jorah Mormont to his search.
couple: Robb/Margaery : Sansa/Loras : Rickon/lyanna Mormont : jon/ygritte: Arya/Gendry: Bran/daenerys :Samwell Tarly/Vère (Gilly) !

Lives except: Stark family, Tyrell family, Shireen baratheon, Osha, Myrcella baratheon: tyrion lannister: family sands: Roslin tully (born frey):
mance rayder, Tormund, Karsi, all the giants, the children of the forest, women and children of the people-free, ect ...

Death of:family Baratheon, Family lannister: Bolton, Frey, Fer-born, gregor clegane, Mace tyrrel, Mestre Pycelle, Viserys targaryen, Petir baelish, lisa arryn:
Viserys targaryen, Daario Naharis, the great sparrow his disciple is their destroyed temple: The Thenns and 10,000 savage men : 60,000 Westerland soldiers,
18,000 iron soldiers, 20,000 soldiers of the reach, 30,000 stormlands soldiers, 35,000 dothraki warrior, 80,000 white walker,
tens of thousands of mercenaries of pirates and slavers and criminal : and at least one hundred thousand dead ...

Harem Lover 26 chapter 70 . 4/29/2018
I haven't read all of this yet so I don't know if you added her, but please add in Maxims.
guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2017
Grammar: Absolutely Disgusting/Retarded
Story: Absolutely Disgusting/Non-existent
Characters: Absolutely Disgusting, Superman sucks
Author: Retarded Idiot/Born in the sewers
Guest chapter 68 . 7/24/2017
dimensional rift with a female superman
Guest chapter 26 . 2/25/2017
the heck how is donna a virgin again thought she lost it over 10 chapters ago
chimera629 chapter 1 . 12/16/2016
Which one of these is the first story
Gr3y chapter 1 . 9/29/2016
God! It still not fixed? It imposible to read this shit with so many mistakes!
danil123 chapter 1 . 8/19/2016
I suppose it would be good after being checked for errors but now my eyes are hurt.
blaker316 chapter 54 . 8/17/2016
i say add some Lois lane Lucy Lane Thea Queen Lana Lang
Ax Deros Kuro chapter 50 . 8/8/2016
I 've been reading your story for a while now and every time I like more . I would recommend put Zatanna , Mera , Poison Ivy , Maxima or Lana :P
24 | Page 1 2 Next »