Been slowly reading this for about a week now. This chapter (Human/Froslass) is by far your best.

I want a male human name Lucas with a shiny female Cofagrigus, Cofagrigus was Lucas's Partner Pokemon but in a long time being with each other, Lucas start to got attract with his female Cofagrigus and one day when he can't handle it anymore, he rape female Cofagrigus and accidently impregnant her

So, have you seen the Pokemon leaks? As someone who absolutely loves the cyndaquil line, the typhlosion allegations got me shaking and crying right now fr fr. The Rapidash lore also seems like it could be used as the foundation for something.

Hello. I have read every single one of your stories and it has given me such joy. I do think that you could do something with this series... As well as maybe make a story based on this world you've made. Btw, I actually have some ideas for you; three in fact. In case you want to hear them. Let me know by replying back, and continue your great work.

This is such great writing, I cried so hard.

This is amazing, and I loved the memory crystals being used.

My bad, sent it early. Let me finish it.

But over time, he began to look and act differently around her. When he finally expressed his true feelings and wants for her, she then knew who he was at his heart. When she rejected him, his response would forever remain in her memory. He grabbed her mate, her true love, and murdered him on the spot. As soon as he did this, and taking advantage of her shock, he implanted a miniscule remote detonation bomb he had bought off the black market in her back, promising that if she were to ever try and hurt him or leave, he would kill her too. That was when she was only 20. Since then, her life was hell. But, she never gave in, never let him break her. She would find a way to break free, and kill the man who murdered her love. Eventually, she finally destroys the controller for the minibomb, and attacks her ‘trainer’, nearly killing him before she is forced to flee as the police arrive due to his screams. She has been on the run since, but she can only hide in the city for so long before she is found, and imprisoned once again. Though she swore to never trust a human ever again after her mate’s death, she finds an unlikely ally, one whom may open her heart to humans once again.

Kaine: Male human, 35 years old. A sadistic and Cruel man, one who is very fond of finding lonely pokemon, drugging them to take to his home, raping them, then leaving them like nothing ever happened. But one day, when he finds an Alpha Salazzle, he KNEW he had found what he had been looking for. So, taking a new approach, he decided to take her, and her ‘partner’, in as his first pokemon. Slowly, and carefully, he planned on how to make her his. After several months of planning, he found a way, and he could wait no longer. So, he finally confessed to her, in his own perverse and twisted way, revealing his true colors to the pair. When she rejected him, with glee, he grabbed her ‘mate’ and snapped his spine, killing him instantly. As soon as he did this, he enacted his evil plan. He inserted a small bomb into her back, and promised her that if she attempted to remove it, run, or fight him, she would die. After that day, he would indulge his darkest fantasies weekly, sometimes a few times a week. And after so long of having his way, he forgot what kinda of pokemon he had, and how determined she was go get revenge. And so, in an act of carelessness, he left the remote for the bomb visible to the Salazzle one time he was indulging himself, and she struck. He barely survived, and when the police arrived, he claimed that she attacked him for no reason, and given that he had purposefully made false, but credible evidence to suggest this, the police believed him and sought to bring his plaything to justice. He would soon learn that his days were numbered.

Smelt: Alpha Shiny Female Charizard, 18 years old, Lizzie’s replacement since her attempted murder of Kaine. She had been raised from birth by a kind a loving family, who always treated her like one of their own. Unfortunately, during a very bad lighting storm, her family was tragically killed, leaving her and her families other pokemon alone. While her friends were all given to loving people who took good care of them in spite of such a tragedy, she was not so lucky. The man she was given to was nothing more than a monster, a demon in human skin. He abused her in the worst ways, but never killed her. After all, why would he? He enjoyed her suffering and her body, and she could do nothing about it, for he controlled her very being through his vile device inside her back. She did not know how much longer she could take it, but fate would soon smile on her, and she would know freedom and love once again.

Now, the finer details, story, dialogue, etc, I leave up to you. I just want to give the groundwork. As for the layout of the story, I think a two parter work best. Here is what I have currently, and you can change things if you want, but I would prefer if this is how the story goes.

Part 1; Act 1: Troy is framed for rape, leaves his hometown for the farthest city he can afford, and tries to start a new life. It goes well, and he is happy, though his wishes he wasn’t alone.

Part 1; Act 2: Lizzie struggles every day in the city, as she cannot be seen by human or pokemon for fear of her being discovered by Kaine. Eventually, she runs into Troy, and he decides to offer her into his home, which she grudgingly accepts, due to her situation.

Part 1; Act 3: Over time, as the two get to know each other on a number of levels, feelings for each other develop. After several more months, they both confess their feelings for one another, but are soon discovered by the police after an anonymous tip. This is where part 1 ends, with them both being imprisoned.

Part 2; Act 1: Lizzie is taken away soon after being incarcerated, and she comes face to face with Kaine, and his new plaything. Enraged that he did the same thing to another innocent pokemon, and such a young one no less, she attempts to attack him, but is held back by the authorities. After she is properly restrained, she is taken to a courtroom to decide her fate.

Part 2; Act 2; Troy attempts to escape, and is successful, until he learns where Lizzie is being taken, and who is with her. Outraged, he makes his way there, only to be halted by Kaine’s Charizard, of whom he must confront if he is to reach his love. A brutal fight ensues, in which the Charizard very nearly kills him, but stops before the final blow can be delivered. She then tells him that she knows who Lizzie is, and that the only way she can be saved, is if he removes her bomb to show what Kaine did to her, and Lizzie. But, he refuses to kill her, and instead tells her to pretend that he is her prisoner, and to take him to the courtroom. Realizing his plan, she accepts.

Part 2; Act 3: Before Lizzie’s trial can take place, Kaine comes to mock her and promise he will enjoy her punishment for what she did to him. Right as she is about to be taken away, Smelt arrives with Troy as her prisoner, surprising Kaine. Before he can decide what to do with him, Troy spots the remote he knows controls Smelt’s bomb, and smashes it. With his ONLY method of control over Smelt gone, and with the bomb deactivated, Smelt is free, and can now reveal the truth that would not be believed from Lizzie. With the evidence they need, and with Smelt quickly restraining Kaine, they all head to the courtroom to reveal the truth.

Part 2; Act 4: With the truth revealed, and their names cleared, Troy, Lizzie, and Smelt all devide what to do next. But, with both Troy and Smelt helping Lizzie, she decides that she wants to help Troy clear his name in his hometown. So, all three head there, and when they do, they all force Troy’s friend to tell the truth, being that her ditto impersonated him, so that she could get more attention, and get a new ‘hotter’ guy. With all of that done, Troy and Lizzie finally make love, and Smelt gets feelings for both, though really only Troy. And that leads into the final section. The time skip. They both love Troy, though Lizzie is older, technically more experienced, and loves Troy more, so she is the dominant of the two. The story ends with them both being pregnant.

Honestly, you have FULL control over this idea if you use it, but if you do, I would like for it to be as close to my original idea as possible. If you have any questions, or want clarifications, message me privately. I’ll be happy to answer them. Hope this is good enough to fit in with the others. Thx, and hope more awesome chapters/mini-stories come out soon, but not too soon.

Ok, so I have a great idea for a story, but it will be a bit darker in themes.

So, let me give you my ideas for the characters and their stories, and my overall story layout plans

Troy: Human Male, 25 years old, Body Builder and Martial Arts Master. Framed for rape by his very own friend’s Ditto who did so purely because so she could go out with another guy more easily, Troy leaves his hometown for the closest city, hoping to find a better life for himself there, and as far away as he can afford from those who both betrayed and abandoned him. After a few years, he thinks he has finally found his place. A nice paying job at a high-end restaurant, several new friends, and a nice small house to call his own. Unfortunately, one chance encounter in an alleyway on his way to work with a Salazzle changes everything.

Lizzie: Alpha Salazzle, 45 years old. Once, when she was still so young and naive to the darkness of the world, she thought that the human who took her and her partner in as his own was a good man. For a while, he was. But over time

Good to see a new upload! Im a bit late to the party I was busy writing my own stuff and didn’t check ff in a long while. Enjoyed this story a lot but tbh I almost always do enjoy them. Look forward to future chapters but dont push yourself too hard.

God damn, I was not ready for that ending. Fantastic work!

beautifully written as always, keep it upthe world building and little easter eggs and call backs are always fun or intresting to see. i love these stories and always come back to read through them every once in a while. im glad to see they are still getting love.

Gracias por seguir actualizando la historia, no soy bueno con las reseñas, pero no sabes cómo me alegra cuando me llega la notificación de que actualizaste alguna de tus historias, me hacen el día :D

Love the refrence to sting there

Beautiful.
Cant describe it in any other way

Take a break if you have to, burnout's a bitch
We will wait for as long as you need
Take care of yourself too

This chapter was great. The emotions, how they acted, it was all great. Honestly, I’d kinda like to see a slice-of-life-esque sequel to this.