Hi, it has been awhile since I have left a review on this story, so let's begin shall we.

So for starters the grammar is still as good as I remember, however some of the chapters don't give me the same feeling as some of the older ones, though I could just be picky.

The one true gripe I have/had is the sizes of the male genitals, now I will give credit that they are varied so that is good, but nine inches, really? Six, maybe seven I can believe, not eight and nine.

So for a experiment I looked up the chance of such sizes occurring naturally. I was a bit surprised.

1% of men have a size between seven and eight. 0.6% of men have size of nine, and 0.2% of men have over nine.

Much more then I thought but, eh.

Overall, still good. And if you need any ideas I have a few, though they maybe a bit much compared to what you normally do.

Either way have a good day or night.

Sincerely,
Zerkil.

Personally I would love you do the Hisuian Liligant I find her her design just perfect contrast to her main one and continuing the theme of the noble pokemon finding love just so intriguing to me personally

Keep up the great work also I can't wait for more Yu-Gi-Oh dragon maid.

I'll be honest, I'm much happier this was about Hisuian Goodra, it's so fluffy and cute. It made me want to get a switch and the game just to use the Dragon Steel type. It's such a unique one and it needs more written about it. Thanks for all your hard work.

Sending youMotivation] Fr tho I loved this one. Way more than I expected too. Take your time. From my own experience I find if you force yourself to write you burnout faster. Try to write whatever “calls” to you the most. I’m here for whatever comes next all the options you listed are good.

That would be something funny to see two foxes fighting over there mate. I remember seeing this one video of real foxes both female screaming at each other in order to intimidate the other only neither was backing down and was screaming non-stop at each other until their owner separated them.

Honestly, with how hard you’re working to write these entertaining stories of yours, I wouldn’t mind either way which one you write.

However, you did mention that you want to add more male Pokémon/female human stories, so that’s a point towards the Luxray.

On the other hand, Hisuian Lilligant is beautiful and a story featuring her and her Warden would be fun. I can imagine her being a lot more rebellious, not wanting to be the next Alpha and practically throwing herself at her human warden to try and get into his pants. That will make it different from the Sneasler story.

But, a Delphox and Zoroark fighting over the same guy only to end up sharing him? Oh, the shenanigans just wrote themselves.

…Sorry if I’m not helping, but all your ideas are so fun, that I honestly can’t choose.

Had a story idea similar to the last except it was F Seviper and F Zangoose fighting over their trainer while ALSO fighting each other.

Marvelous! Your story write up is great! Request: please make a story with Delphox (F) if possible.

I swear my favorite recurring joke in this story is the Abby the Absol thing, it's so funny.. like the scene could be very serious like... The Tsareena anxiously waited for her trainer to return worrying if he was hurt, she paced around the medical room with worry while the TV in the background had an episode of The Adventures of Abby the Absol was playing.

Even something small like that makes me burst out loud laughing and makes my day, I'm always hoping to find new Adventures of Abby the Absol callbacks/cameos in the modern installments.

This was grate

Pretty awesome stuff l always love ya fics! But i have an request if you do those it was a (F) slazzle about real love but whatever you do i hope you be great, do great things!

I like the ones where the two girls are fighting or competing for the man, brings comedy gold and drama at the same time.

It was beautiful!
So heartwarming and wholesome. I loved it!

You have my vote for more hisuian stories.

Thanks for the chapter. Best wishes!

This was a very lovely chapter.

I liked the angle of Clemont searching for the Vivillions to bring them home, not just out of care for them, but to remember his friends. I also like your angle that Clemont suffers from Survivor's Guilt. That's rarely tackled in fiction, and especially in such an emotional, but sensitive way.
The fact Jill suffers the same was also a genius stroke, and both of them finding solace in each other and helping each other to come to grips with their grief and move past it.

I also liked how they each confronted the other's tormentor. How it was Clemont who confronted the Carnivines, and Jill who fought the Ursaring. That was meaningful.

I had not known about the Hisuian form of Goodra, but I thought you did a fabulous job incorporating her shell into the story, and the romance scene. That was a genuinely fantastic idea.
I also like how Goodra being wonderful companion Pokemon was established here, given this takes place a longer time ago.

For a next chapter, a female Delphox and Zoroark fighting over their trainer could be good, but maybe have it he hates them fighting, and because it hurts him, they decide to share, since they care about his feelings. That's where it shows whether it's about your own ego, or whether you genuinely love someone.
That's my two Pennies, anyway.

Beautiful chapter, and I know what it's like to not have the drive or energy to write at times. Heat also makes that worse. ':P