Damn it. I fell for your new story which reminded me that you made -this- story that I fell in love with years ago and hasn't been updated in almost seven years...

I am a glutton for punishment and disappointment it seems.

Looking forward to Chapter 09.

Looking forward to Chapter 9.

Hopefully this will continue someday soon

You lost me as a reader by adding yet another crossover. Especially as I hate this one.

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My only problem is that Riser is arrogant, not stupid. After seeing how are Sirzechs and Grayfia are acting with Naruto he probably will not antagonize him, at least not with that intention. For fix that I would just make Sirzechs and Grayfia appear after Naruto defeat Riser. Also, after he destroys Rias's orb so easy, and destroy Sona's peering, who is her equal in this point of the story, Rias would not underestimate Naruto. Then I remembered this is a crack fic Xd

Kkkkk, rias era obrigada a salvar o Issei? Não. Ele recebeu o selo para invocar a rias caso o desejo dele fosse forte o suficiente

Update

update?

Kudos

What's the point in writing this far, and then being so lazy or stupid that you abandon it?

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Ok having naruto hate all fallen angles in the beginning is bad because not all of them are bad the only one kenbil killed his parents not the three female fallen angels and having him kill them all is just saying fuck you fallen agenel faction you have nobody left dud or mam you making naruto in the beginning a monster to one group because he disobeyed his dads orders and say one guy who we know gets killed later but having him do that is uncalled for so that’s my thoughts for the beginning

/Ooh, I like it. No super humble Naruto. Yes, "Lucifer," I can make you my bitch. lol