Reviews for Dead Man Walking V2
Guest chapter 7 . 5/4
Guest chapter 7 . 4/14
If people aren't willing to see the "hard facts" send them out without their help, the VERY LAST THING they figure out will be that they were wrong, KEEP DOING it, even if it means ONLY the outcasts are LEFT, WHO CARES? ADAPT OR DIE.. That's just evolution at work. But you'll find most humans cowardly enough, their goodwill and their opinions can be bought with their lives.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/14
A gary stu? SERIOUSLY?
Wolfone10 chapter 2 . 4/14
The will fight each other and eat you alive?.. Um no, not if he IS the embodiment of death, THEN HE JUST KILLS THEM ALL FOR TRYING, sounds easy enough to me! And leave the leaf, yeah that's a GREAT IDEA, because then EVERYONE will be after him ANYWAY, (great "plan"...) (sigh) that NEVER WORKS!
Edmonton58 chapter 7 . 6/7/2017
More updates please
Zane666 chapter 7 . 5/30/2017
update as soon as possible i would like to know more of narutos adventures and also know when he does go back to the village how his parents sisters and new brother as well as friends react to his new powers. how he will interact with them and how far he has grown with his abilites. I would like to see this story all the way through please continue this story.
BlackMoon3464 chapter 7 . 5/28/2017
aww please update soon i want to know what will happened next
ivanganev1992 chapter 2 . 4/22/2017
Ch 2 So NarutoSans the Reaper .
DALucifer13 chapter 4 . 1/12/2017
Don't tell me he will be another alucard
a.marsh55 chapter 7 . 1/4/2017
Are you going to continue this? It would suck if you just let this one sit unfinished.
celestialfox1 chapter 7 . 12/7/2016
please please update i love this story and i would love to read more
Guest chapter 7 . 12/1/2016
Holy shit, this is actually really promising. This Naruto isn't automatically a mature BAMF, he isn't the holder of the Kyuubi's soul, he isn't extremely neglected, and the Outcast's powers are actually pretty well-balanced. Its kinda hard to get emotionally invested in your writing and characters though, but that's perfectly fine. Other than that, this fic actually has a really interesting concept and plot as far as I can see, and I really hope this wouldn't end up as a Gary-stu trainwreck. Keep writing, your ideas are pretty good. Looking forward to seeing more!
Darklightning843 chapter 7 . 10/16/2016
Please continue this at some point! I'd love to read more soon
. DL843
Skullguy7 chapter 7 . 9/26/2016
An awesome story please make more and possibly some time skipping I want to see Naruto build that village of his
Guest chapter 7 . 9/8/2016
please update i would love to read more
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