I find myself like this ️️ with this development of Fleur and Hermione's relationship

Hello. It's a pity that the story "Paint it, Black" has been deleted. I am sincerely sorry if my comment with a request to translate the story contributed to this. I still hope that we will be able to write to each other: you will be able to restore the history, and I will translate it. It really turns out very awkward...

I wanted to read this to the end only to find it abandoned. I may still complete but what bugs me the most is someone mentioning this is on Ao3. Could someone help me find it if it is?

Oh how I love this story. So glad you’re posting it in new clothes on Ao3. This is easily the best Bellamione story I’ve ever read, it’s always nice to come back and read it from the top. Smile in the same places. Worrying bout Hermione’s future. Gasping at every level.
Bless your genius for this story, truly.
Till the next time!

I wanna know who volunteered to be her mentor

i’ve just read this fully again for like. the fourth time (maybe fifth?). i love this story. i really enjoy how you have taken JKR’s world and successfully applied a twist to it with the cup and no dark lord and i will continue to reread this work ans praise it. Thanks again!

Such an amazing story! Thank you for writing it

The end of the chapter got me, wasn’t excepting that! Great job loving the story!

the previous chapters got me shedding tears, it's honestly unacceptable that she has to face this kind of fate, in the brightside the heavy feeling she has been carrying for God's knows. Finally having someone to understand her situation. I get hermione, I sometimes being hate being pitied at.

For bella, I was touched how much she cared for the young woman, despite her evil personality (not that much, in this fic) she can't help but wanting to understand hermione. Well, in the end Bella accomplished to get inside of the young woman's mind. It really make an impact in their relationship, which is wholesome

Yeah, I can’t read this. The grammar issues make it hard to parse lines properly at first read. Really unfortunate, because it had promise otherwise. You should try running things through grammarly or something.

Did you lose a beta or something? Grammar and punctuation REALLY took a hit here. A lot of missing words too.

Fantastic! Drawn in hook, line and sinker. Couldn't put it down and loved it. Thank you for writing and sharing.

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you did what I hoped you wouldn't. you started the sequel then just walked away from it. how sad. it has been sitting for five years,why not delete it so people won't get their hopes up that it will be finished ?

Off the charm
off balance.
set OFF.
incline.
kicking OFF
make room for.
boggart
drifts OFF to sleep.
tomes.
bouncing g OFF his defence.