i’ve just read this fully again for like. the fourth time (maybe fifth?). i love this story. i really enjoy how you have taken JKR’s world and successfully applied a twist to it with the cup and no dark lord and i will continue to reread this work ans praise it. Thanks again!

Such an amazing story! Thank you for writing it

The end of the chapter got me, wasn’t excepting that! Great job loving the story!

the previous chapters got me shedding tears, it's honestly unacceptable that she has to face this kind of fate, in the brightside the heavy feeling she has been carrying for God's knows. Finally having someone to understand her situation. I get hermione, I sometimes being hate being pitied at.

For bella, I was touched how much she cared for the young woman, despite her evil personality (not that much, in this fic) she can't help but wanting to understand hermione. Well, in the end Bella accomplished to get inside of the young woman's mind. It really make an impact in their relationship, which is wholesome

Yeah, I can’t read this. The grammar issues make it hard to parse lines properly at first read. Really unfortunate, because it had promise otherwise. You should try running things through grammarly or something.

Did you lose a beta or something? Grammar and punctuation REALLY took a hit here. A lot of missing words too.

Fantastic! Drawn in hook, line and sinker. Couldn't put it down and loved it. Thank you for writing and sharing.

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you did what I hoped you wouldn't. you started the sequel then just walked away from it. how sad. it has been sitting for five years,why not delete it so people won't get their hopes up that it will be finished ?

Off the charm
off balance.
set OFF.
incline.
kicking OFF
make room for.
boggart
drifts OFF to sleep.
tomes.
bouncing g OFF his defence.

Heirloom.
this kind g FROM here.
playing second fiddle.

not taking her eyes off.
shrugging OFF her robe .
from your class.
cover OFF the mirror
The tome.
wear glasses.

You must sever the soul. Psyching himself. Slytherin's slither into.
herself raw. Curious how people seem to easily be able to get into
the grounds even with all of the security around. was this malfoy's doings again ?

If I didn't know better I would think that Ginny isn't the weasley that he has a crush on. Did she not tell Hermione to find a mirror to talk to her not just the Mirror of Erised ?

cutlery..I wonder much rather see a Fluermione in the end. Bella is too much of a bitch that Hermione don't need to put up with.

Accompanies Hermione .
shouting from Muggles.
Bella is
rather se!fish isn't she .