Reviews for Fractures
SinsDarkAngel chapter 1 . 1/2/2016
I really like the start of this story. This has massive potential to go so many places. I like that Hermione is going to just give up. I could never see her in the books as one to just let something go without a fight and Bella, part of me feels like she is just trying to get Hermione to push herself to show her potential, but the other part of me feels like she's just being Bella. Reading your other stories I know this one is going to be just as epic. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter. Update soon!
commanderheartache chapter 1 . 1/2/2016
This was amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter
Scout-Reads chapter 1 . 1/2/2016
I liked how Bellatrix wordlessly communicated a secret with Hermione by simultaneously threatening her (also silently).

Hermione seems to have more spunk than her nightmares would imply from her abused youth (going by the stereotype).

I like to imagine that Bellatrix actually manipulated Hermione into staying in the race because she wanted her there via her goading.
Wrispen chapter 1 . 1/2/2016
Ooh very clever AU, don't think I have seen anything like this :) interesting seeing Bellatrix as the DADA teacher. Do believe I will read this opening chapter again tomorrow as it is 2 am right now haha great start ::D
echo-eli chapter 1 . 1/2/2016
absolutely worth continuing ;)
1,835 | « Prev Page 1 .. 113 120 121 122 123