Reviews for Fractures |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so confused with the logistics for this round lol! It says in the previous chapter that 21 contestants remain. If they were required to eliminate 3 competitors before being allowed to leave by the flag, doesn't that mean only 5 can move on from this round, not 10? 3 eliminated 1 eliminator 4 contestants 21 / 4 5 survivors* *And this is assuming a perfect scenario where the ones eliminated weren't able to beat anyone at all, and with 1 eliminator beating 4 contestants. If I'm wrong, someone please explain the math to me! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I’ve re-read this about five times, it’s just so good :,) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know it's been a long time since you wrote this, but I have to say-I'm apart of alot of Fandoms and I've read ALOT of stories, but NOTHING comes close to this masterpiece. This is one that it's probably going to stick with me until the end of time. The characters and the story is just enthralling. i couldn't put it down until I finished this in one sitting. The slow burn was evil, but I loved every second of it. thank you so much for sharing this with the world. We are so lucky to have this gem that we can always go back and relive! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story. Read it immediately, you won't regret it |
![]() ![]() ![]() When you finally do get those two together,whenever that is, will you be fading to black when they start bumping uglies? asking for a friend. Hermione tunes her out,her mind. pulling off... kicked me from... I plan... tome. deflects the kick. just curious ,what does one do when they are mooching? He's safe. why should Ronald win ,who gains from it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() One hand. Slipping. . Set off a fiendfyre. will the pure blood pricks try to disqualify her to keep her from . having a chance to win? Guess Draco is pissed about now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Believe it when I see it. who was that with the seer and what did her family do to get killed by Morganna? |
![]() ![]() ![]() She is coping. heirloom. Thinking FROM here. diving OFF the edge. Curious to see if they fixed your problem of not knowing the difference between of and off. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Screams herself raw. hole outside... those inbred pure bloods are determined to stop the little Mudblood from showing the world that they are full of crap. |
![]() ![]() ![]() When haven't you put angst in this story? will Harry and or Ronald be gone after the next level or will she save their asses once again.? You have been threatening Bellamoine for thirty chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() She must have been the only one to not know that Ronald was always a shallow bitter fool. he is a waste as a wizard. he should have been a squib. did Bella destroy the prophesy? if not will we ever find out what it said? will we find out who the mysterious A is that she couldn't save? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Bella has always been a selfish bitch. I have noticed that pure bloods don't seem to life until the century mark is this due to all of the inbreeding I wonder? not sure why I am still here. What kind of nasty trick will the snobs try to pull on Hermione when she heads into the level I wonder? who is the mysterious A you keep teasing us with? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that is interesting. so is Morganna saying that a relationship between her and Bella is doomed? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hopefully there will be explanations coming soon about what Is going on with the entity that keeps trying to come through the mirror? it would be nice if Ronald is thrown out of the competition soon. galleons If those two get together it will turn into the most toxic relationship ever seen by the world. now that the mirror is gone does that MT that Hermione will stop getting her mystery visitor or does that mean they will visit more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() If it goes any slower it will start going backwards., |