Reviews for Fractures
LostFantasist chapter 35 . 12/29/2021
I'm so confused with the logistics for this round lol! It says in the previous chapter that 21 contestants remain. If they were required to eliminate 3 competitors before being allowed to leave by the flag, doesn't that mean only 5 can move on from this round, not 10?

3 eliminated 1 eliminator 4 contestants
21 / 4 5 survivors*

*And this is assuming a perfect scenario where the ones eliminated weren't able to beat anyone at all, and with 1 eliminator beating 4 contestants.

If I'm wrong, someone please explain the math to me! XD
Jennyviper chapter 1 . 12/29/2021
I think I’ve re-read this about five times, it’s just so good :,)
Lexi-TheEvilRegal chapter 49 . 12/7/2021
I know it's been a long time since you wrote this, but I have to say-I'm apart of alot of Fandoms and I've read ALOT of stories, but NOTHING comes close to this masterpiece. This is one that it's probably going to stick with me until the end of time. The characters and the story is just enthralling. i couldn't put it down until I finished this in one sitting. The slow burn was evil, but I loved every second of it. thank you so much for sharing this with the world. We are so lucky to have this gem that we can always go back and relive!
dinkyduck149 chapter 50 . 11/21/2021
Fantastic story. Read it immediately, you won't regret it
andrewpine chapter 36 . 9/7/2021
When you finally do get those two together,whenever that is, will you be
fading to black when they start bumping uglies? asking for a friend.
Hermione tunes her out,her mind.
pulling off...
kicked me from...
I plan...
deflects the kick.
just curious ,what does one do when they are mooching?
He's safe.
why should Ronald win ,who gains from it?
andrewpine chapter 35 . 9/7/2021
One hand. Slipping.
. Set off a fiendfyre.
will the pure blood pricks try to
disqualify her to keep her from .

having a chance to win?
Guess Draco is pissed about now.
andrewpine chapter 34 . 9/7/2021
Believe it when I see it.
who was that with the
seer and what did her family do
to get killed by Morganna?
andrewpine chapter 33 . 9/7/2021
She is coping.
Thinking FROM here.
diving OFF the edge.
Curious to see if they fixed your problem of not
knowing the difference between of and off.
andrewpine chapter 32 . 9/7/2021
Screams herself raw.
hole outside...
those inbred pure bloods are determined to stop the little Mudblood from showing the
world that they are full of crap.
andrewpine chapter 31 . 9/7/2021
When haven't you put angst in this story?
will Harry and or Ronald be gone after the next level
or will she save their asses once again.?
You have been threatening Bellamoine
for thirty chapters.
andrewpine chapter 30 . 9/6/2021
She must have been the only one to not know that Ronald was always a shallow bitter fool.
he is a waste as a wizard. he should have been a squib.
did Bella destroy the prophesy? if not will we ever find out what it said?
will we find out who the mysterious A is that she couldn't save?
andrewpine chapter 29 . 9/6/2021
So Bella has always been a selfish bitch.
I have noticed that pure bloods don't seem to life until the century mark
is this due to all of the inbreeding I wonder?
not sure why I am still here.
What kind of nasty trick will the snobs try to pull on
Hermione when she heads into the level I wonder?
who is the mysterious A you keep teasing us with?
andrewpine chapter 28 . 9/6/2021
Well that is interesting.
so is Morganna saying that a relationship between her and Bella is doomed?
andrewpine chapter 27 . 9/6/2021
Hopefully there will be explanations coming soon about what Is
going on with the entity that keeps trying to come through the mirror?
it would be nice if Ronald is thrown out of the competition soon.
If those two get together it will turn into the most toxic relationship ever seen by the world.
now that the mirror is gone does that MT that Hermione will stop getting her mystery visitor
or does that mean they will visit more?
andrewpine chapter 25 . 9/5/2021
If it goes any slower it will start going backwards.,
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