Reviews for Fractures
andrewpine chapter 24 . 9/5/2021
extra weight from Ron.
leaves from...
andrewpine chapter 20 . 9/4/2021
Heir returns.
on slaught.
bouncing off.
cue will you be waiting until the last two chapters before
Bella and the muggleborn will be bumping uglies ?
why can you not spell the word off?
so is Hermione actually Fleur's mate? if so
why are neither of them suffering from being apart.
does Prof. Black seem a tad jealous of the little Mudblood?
andrewpine chapter 18 . 9/4/2021
What is the Black bitch trying to accomplish by the way she treats Hermione?
I know why Ronald is keeping his distance but where the hell is Harry her supposed best friend.. will she become the only Muggleborn to ever win the tournament I wonder?
andrewpine chapter 17 . 9/4/2021
I am surprised that Ronald hasn't tried to get her back
for kicking his ignorant ass. From falling off her broom.
Is it an out of control Veela that is doing all of the damage?
andrewpine chapter 15 . 9/4/2021
.. first time you have written off and still got it wrong.
what does it mean that she doesn't feel the pull? is she much stronger then
she believes she is? is she Morganna reincarnated?
andrewpine chapter 14 . 9/4/2021
Ginny taunts from...
Eternal glory.
the buzz from...
why does Hogwarts employ a person as a teacher that has
major anger issues?
andrewpine chapter 13 . 9/3/2021
I can see that when those two become,a couple the angry sex will be epic.
looks from.
Screw Lavender and her little Won,Won.
obviously she hasn't been able to catch a break,her whole life.
andrewpine chapter 12 . 9/3/2021
What did she do? who was that,that Hermione case in her vision?
Who is close? major questions that need answers.
andrewpine chapter 11 . 9/2/2021
Imagine the damage.
I have to ask the question what the fuck is Bella's problem?
the bitch hates her sister so that statement is bullshit. she is just a
nosey bitch.
this is a very ,very disturbing relationship they have.
Does Ronald really believe he can beat Hermione in a duel?
andrewpine chapter 10 . 9/2/2021
Just how screwed up is the wizarding world that they would let lose
one or more Man eating creatures on a bunch of kids?
releases her.
andrewpine chapter 9 . 9/2/2021
I gather the school doesn't have rules against teachers stalking students.
the word is still off not of. if you ever watched the show Supernatural in one of the first episodes in season one the boys went up against a Wendigo. can't wait to see who
the imposter is and they will do. my money is on Neville since Ronald would be too obvious
this early.
andrewpine chapter 8 . 9/2/2021
no matter what she thinks I don't believe she could
turn unto her father. she might turn into that bitch of a
DADA teacher. now all she has to do is survive the ignorance
of the two idiots during the next stage of the tournament.
andrewpine chapter 7 . 9/2/2021
Herself OFF the edge.
smoke inhalation
jumping OFF a ledge.
jump OFF the ledge
I am curious to find out
how soon Ronald turns on the rest of
them or at the very least Hermione.
andrewpine chapter 6 . 9/2/2021
Anticipation is clowing.
I always thought that the title of the series should be "Hermione Grangerthe Girl That Saved
Harry's dumb ass"
andrewpine chapter 5 . 9/2/2021
Don't understand why writers don't know the difference between of and off.
if she were smart she would leave her three team members twisting in the wind and just take care
of herself considering they will probably get her killed due to them being idiots.
mind OFF things. Does Bellatrix act this way towards Hermione not only because she
isn't a pure blood but because she reminds her of her at that age? or just because she is a bitch?
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