Your paragraphs are far too long.

Thank you for the fun, quick read. I enjoyed watching Darcy and Elizabeth put their heads together to figure out the mystery without realizing they were attracted to each other, until the only possible solution was to spend the rest of their lives together. lol. Nicely done!

Oh Lord too funny! Like an Agatha Christie book adding in Pride and Prejudice characters! With Lizzie as Sherlock Holmes and Darcy as the faithful assistant!

What fun!

Caroline seems to be mentally vacant if she actually thinks she can compromise Darcy twice in twelve hours!
And with Wickham dead, one has to wonder what will fell Collins, given it appears death is preferable to marrying her. The Bennet girls got off lightly in comparison.

Charles and Elizabeth are too kind to someone who has proven to be a snake in the grass. Would Caroline change her ways just because she got caught with Wickham? She’s already tried bullying Charles - now the old tears/vulnerable routine?

Oh BLISS! Caroline and George SO deserve each other!
This is perfect!

Great story! I enjoyed the writing, the characters and the plot.

vert much enjoying the story, and like the author's notes as well.

Wonderful story!

What a great story! Elizabeth is revealing her brilliance!

What fun!

What fun! Brilliant!

Lovely story. Just finished it here and then bought it on Amazon.

If they were all going toward the sound of the gunshot, they would have all been headed outside. The sound comes from where the gun was fired, not where the bullet hits.