Reviews for The Marginally Revised Tale of Tom, Rick and Harry
UnusualOutlet chapter 5 . 2/17/2017
UPDATE THIS PLEEEASE
Saphireanime chapter 7 . 4/14/2016
I like it so far. I like it when the wrong twin isnt a huge jerk or sass mouth, like you've made Ricky, so well done. I like harry and hermione's fledgling relationship too. Snapes fairness was a surprise but ok. Glad to see good dursleys too, there are too few of those. Update soon
anotherboarduser chapter 7 . 4/5/2016
Interesting chapter, but I think some characterization parts are off.
Deathday Party Planner chapter 7 . 4/5/2016
Terrific Chapter! Everything is all a swirl, thank you for sharing your delightful writing!
pawsrule chapter 7 . 4/4/2016
Good story so far.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/4/2016
not seeing the dark
Guest chapter 3 . 4/4/2016
umm weres the dark
Deathday Party Planner chapter 6 . 4/2/2016
Marvelous! I really enjoyed this beginning and look forward to coming episodes. Thank you for sharing!
Sunshine011 chapter 6 . 4/2/2016
I like this! It's a cute story very attention grabbing and well written. Please keep updating id love to read more!
nikkistew2 chapter 6 . 4/2/2016
Loved the deductive reasoning... It never made sense for Dumbles to have magical guardianship of every muggleborn and muggle-raised student. What if there was a conflict of interest? He wasn't running a school, he was running an arena.
shamzika chapter 2 . 2/1/2016
This want what I expected. At all. I'm looking forward to reading more!
Sugar0o chapter 5 . 1/31/2016
eh, i kinda hope that harry gets dumbles back eventually!
Raikaguken chapter 3 . 1/29/2016
did harry get a diffirent wand? since the holly and phoenix core is a light magic wand he'd need something like a Darkwood with threstral hair for darker magic
starboy454 chapter 5 . 1/28/2016
good update
Sunshine-Midnight123 chapter 4 . 1/26/2016
Nice chapter! If I may make a suggestion, perhaps include more of how Harry is taking everything in. Dialogue is great but I feel like there should be less dialogue and more details of Harry's perspective on everything.
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