Reviews for A Single Decision (Take Two)
Patrick the observer chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
So far so good, Have to admit I love the idea of the Emperor getting killed by droids.
PrussianSpaceMarine chapter 8 . 5/5/2016
I must say, I'm very glad you've decided to rewrite this story!

I read the original about 3 years ago, back when I was first really being introduced to fanfiction. It played a big part in inspiring me to start writing my own fanfics. So thanks for that.

Not to degrade the old one, because that one was great too, but this new, rewritten edition is much better. More streamlined and realistic plot. I haven't read the older one in awhile, but I believe the characterization is better, too. So good job with the improvements your writing!

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Guest chapter 8 . 4/24/2016
I hope you keep this up. I really like the story so far.
Daniel chapter 1 . 4/20/2016
I really liked this story and I hope it picks up again at some point
Guest chapter 8 . 3/2/2016
So will we be getting some action (meaning: duels that Grievous actually wins by himself) anytime soon or not really?
TheRebbs98 chapter 8 . 2/20/2016
Oooh, methinks Grievous is going to regret taking those chips out, must prepare for sad Grievous, heehee
Celgress chapter 8 . 2/20/2016
Thanks for another great chapter, keep up the good work. You are one of the best authors on this site, past or present, when it comes to writing the Grievous.
Celgress chapter 7 . 2/17/2016
Thanks for another great chapter.
Rd Awesomeness chapter 3 . 2/13/2016
I love how you made a timeline thing. It is totally brilliant. On another note don't you think the Jedi might have felt the death of Sidious?
Rd Awesomeness chapter 1 . 2/13/2016
This is really good though I am only on the first chapter while I am writing this. I love the plot twist you pulled, it actually reminds me of another story with a sort of similar change where Grievous kills Palpatine in the bridge of the ship. Anyways nice story, I'll probably read it all
Dewaldemar chapter 7 . 2/13/2016
This was very interesting, though I really wanted to see the Separatist Council plotting again or it's final result. The chapter itself is very good! As someone pointed out before me, your story is very mature which is very true!
Guest chapter 6 . 2/11/2016
I do like that there's less about Esera
I do like that you gave up on that intelligent vulture starfighter subplot idea
I do like that the language seems more mature

HOWEVER

I don't like that Grievous didn't kill Palpatine and Anakin by himself
I don't like that there has been no Grievous vs Windu so far or any badass Grievous vs 4 or so jedi fight
I don't like that there are no gore-filled duels
UnspeakableHorror chapter 6 . 2/10/2016
There's a lot going on in this chapter. I really enjoyed the confrontation between Grievous and Obi-Wan. I wonder, once Obi-Wan has more time to think about the events he saw, especially the way Anakin killed Dooku execution-style, what conclusions he will come to?

I enjoyed the scene with Kronaak and I think the plotline around the Jedi defector Esera is shaping up to be quite interesting.

I was happy to see more of Grievous' thought processes in this chapter. Really interested to see if Grievous' personality develops further and if he regains more of his memories.
UnspeakableHorror chapter 2 . 2/8/2016
I really enjoy seeing the perspectives of the different characters. I especially liked Kronaak in this chapter and I hope he gets some more scenes.

I also very much enjoyed seeing Grievous show everyone that the strings are cut and he's not going to going to be anyone's puppet anymore.

Also, maybe it's just me, but I like it when authors give a bit of commentary and context for their work. So I think the author's notes are a good addition. It just seems more interactive for me, which I think is part of the fun of fanfiction.
koszegi.andris chapter 6 . 2/6/2016
I like how the story goes on. I can't wait to see the reactions when the separatist leaders and the General finds out that Palpatine and Darth Sidious was the same person. Also I'm looking foward to see what will they plan to do with the plans Dooku handed over to the Dark lord on Corusant in the begining of the Clone War.
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