Reviews for Just An Average Guy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What a retarded take on Saitama. Its unnecessary to drag this story for this long, would have been much better if this was done in line 5 chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hoping for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this fanfic, I look forward to the next chapters, I really hope this continues |
![]() ![]() This is peak fiction nobody can say otherwise. Bro I'm waiting for another chapter no matter how long it'll take. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This Saitama is mentally retarded, more then the original was... like the antagonist might just tell Saitama that the Titans are the good guys and the humans are the bad guys and he probably start punching the walls down... |
![]() ![]() Short-stack LOL |
![]() ![]() "And how do you plan on keeping Saitama in check?" "I fucking don't." It's ok but kinda lazy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude got hundreds killed and says "sorry but torture bad." Bruh |
![]() ![]() ![]() Menacingly! |
![]() ![]() ![]() trash fic trash author |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tbh saitama would've ended this in 2 chapters. It would be great if you replace him with Iaian instead if you want it to keep up with the story. Not saying that Iaian is weak but his character design reminds me of Teen Reiner, he definitely fits in this crossover. I could imagine the people would assuming him as a warrior or a knight being sent from another island since he's in the medieval times (I know that Aot is supposed to be it's own fantasy world but I'm pretty sure they took some inspiration from all that). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hoping for an update but going forward I really hope you change Saitama's attitude. There's "slow" Saitama and there's this OOC version of Saitama who is beyond retarded and has now yet again let another shifter go... Cmon man Saitama is slow but no where near the lengths your taking it, nor is he as benevolent as your implying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rereading this again. Love the work and hoping for an update. Only glaring mistakes in this work for me personally would be that while Saitama is easy going there's a certain amount of disrespect he'll take and you have him take wayyyy too much. Other problem is the Annie arc. It still works somewhat with Saitama's personality but you overdid it again by having him free her in the manner he did. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an interesting and entertaining story. I look forward to see what'll happen in the next following chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know, this seem like unnecessary event and not good to just drop Zeka like that, he Titan tranfrom OK just let that guy take care him. I will carry dead man in that way... |