Reviews for Breakout |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ahahahahahha can't wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 10 plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooowwwwww Meu coração está derretendo . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cuddle Luffy |
![]() ![]() ![]() SAL |
![]() ![]() ![]() Law |
![]() ![]() ![]() Estou amando essa história! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pls continue the story or put it up for adoption I want to see it completed |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love your story ! When are you going to publish the next chapter ? Update fast, please ! |
![]() ![]() i really love this story,may i have the honor to translate this story into Chinese and post it on the FANS CLUBS?i will mark the source and author,hopefully can receive your reply! T T i have to say this story really make me wanna cry,i almost trust this is another world of one piece that everybody have a happy ending.i not so good at english BTW,so if i say something wrong,i am sorry for that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can almost imagine Rayleigh bopping Ace on the head to discipline his captain's son. "Look Ace I can see you hate your father, but as someone who knew him personally, I can tell you that you're brother Luffy is just like him." |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter and pls continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an amazing read. I couldn't stop laughing, and your grammar was om point! Keep being SUPER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "So… if someone offered you immortality…" Thank you for turning down the idea of "Law would die to save Luffy and make him immortal" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soon enough, Shanks might come visit as well |