Reviews for Without a Trace |
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![]() ![]() This story is amazing. I absolutelly love what you’ve done with Hermione. She isn’t doing anything wrong-wrong. But she is acting like she knows everything best, just like canon, but in contrast to her beeing wrong in book 6 and 7 here she ends up beeing called out on it eventually. It hits that unusual where she is in a realistically bad light, instead of just a caricature. I also really like your Ginny, but that goes for all your stories. She feels like the Ginny canon is suppose to be, but isn’t really explained well enough |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still mad Hermione and Ron weren’t evicted |
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![]() ![]() This must be the 5th or 6th time I've read this story, but my first time really commenting. I absolutely love your stories, and this is one of the best. It's something of a guilty pleasure of mine to read stories where Ron and Hermione aren't painted in the best picture. Honestly Harry and Ginny are the only ones who matter to me, even if it's them against the world, as long as they have each other I'm happy. Like many reviewers, the only thing I didn't really like is that Ron and Hermione got off too easy imho (I never like it when Harry is too forgiving), but as it is your story, it is of course your version that counts (I will create my own headcanon ending if necessary lol). I do understand that they try to be civil for Molly and Arthur's sake, and fully support the part where you said they let go of their anger, that way they don't end up being bitter and are able to live happy lives. |
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![]() ![]() This was a very good story, and personally, I think Harry treated Hermione correctly. She DID HURT HIM by plotting against him with Ron, and deserved what she got. |
![]() ![]() HERMIONE JEAN GRANGER, you have simply GOT to stop thinking that YOU ALONE know what is best for everyone, ESPECIALLY HARRY POTTER. You are EXTREMELY NARROW-MINDED AND JUDGEMENTAL, ALWAYS BELIEVING YOUR WAY is also the BEST WAY, when in many cases it IS NOT. RON WEASLEY, you are a lazy, good-for-nothing traitor who continually lets Harry down when he feels like it. How the hell you became an Auror I will never know. |
![]() ![]() I happen to know that Lavenham is a real town, thank you very much! Unlike Ronald and Percy Weasley,who are both idiotic Gryffindors, I am a highly intelligent and creative Ravenclaw, and definitely not an idiot! |
![]() ![]() REALLY, HERMIONE! You may not like Ginny Weasley, but that's no reason to hate her. Ron is a poor choice for a husband, and if you don't dump him, you'll regret it, since he only looks out for himself. Ginny likes Harry and he likes her, and it ISN'T because of love potions. You can't accept this because in your tiny mind, HERMIONE GRANGER IS NEVER WRONG. Well, let me point out the times you WERE wrong. 1st Year: Setting Snape's robes on fire because you believed he was jinxing Harry's broom. WRONG! Quirrell was doing the jinxing, Snape was fighting it. 3rd Year: You stole Harry's Firebolt, convinced it was cursed. YOU WERE WRONG! 4th Year: You believed Harry entered himself into the Tri-Wizard Tournament. WRONG! It was Death Eater Barty Crouch Junior. Not so smart, are you? |
![]() ![]() HERMIONE GRANGER, FOR A GIRL WHO IS SAID TO BE THE SMARTEST WITCH SINCE ROWENA RAVENCLAW, YOU ARE AMAZINGLY STUPID SOMETIMES! You should NOT have accused Ginny Weasley of dosing Harry Potter with love potions WITHOUT cast-iron PROOF. Proof you do NOT HAVE. But then again, you are a spiteful cow. |
![]() ![]() James and Molly evans. How original. NOT |
![]() ![]() Such an interesting story.. I can't believe I didn't know about it.. It has a very realistic take on the qualities of everyone... Ron can be very thick head in his jealousy... Hermione in her know it all element would behave exactly like that.. Like she would know better how others must be feeling & should be feeling.. It was shown in books several times too... Very interesting |
![]() ![]() Hello, Rereading your story for the 5th time, it's still one of my favorites! I loved hearing what they did to the house and gardens it mad me fell like I was walking in it thanks for the tour! |
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