I absolutely loved this gorgeous piece of work! I'll admit that at first I was apprehensive to read this because I felt the plot was similar to many other fics, but you know.. You proved me wrong. I don't think I have read a more breathtaking story like this. You have twisted the Canon in such a refreshing way and your writing has an impressive flow, it just makes me wanting more! Thank you for thisKeep writing!

Brillant, thanks a lot for sharing

This was SUCH a good chapter. Malfoy and Hermione are so perfectly in character, I love it.

i love your version of Snape. Less snarky, more agreeable

I like your concept of them having a tournament in school. makes it more like an environment of normal schools having extracurricular activities like this

haha. oh yeah Draco. you really are a national treasure.

This is soooooo good! I love it. It is litterally better than most of the books I've read

This is sooo gooodd. Pleasantly surprised by Hermione's actions. I love that she does not have some morally superior complex. She too, is seeing in shades of grey -like you've mentioned- which is honestly so much more realistic. Oh And did I say how awesomely wonderful your creation is?

I'm legit lovingggg this story so faarr! I actually like how Ron is not inherently evil and there isn't that bubbling chemistry between Draco and Hermione -yet. I think you're portraying the characters brilliantly and you've got a serious knack for writing! Looking forward to more great writing and chapters :)

Thank you for explaining the dorm layout situation, was definitely confusing me a bit there, ha ha! Love the plot and dialogue!

You probably won't see this, Olivie, but I absolutely adore your work. I love the talks, the effortless way you make the words flow on the page and create a whole world. I deeply admire the way you do this.
You make Dramione come to life for me. I also love the way you portray Theo.
I was wondering if you are looking for betas and/ or editors?
Your admirer,
Ashe

Such an amazing story! I binged the entire story in 2 days and the plot is just incredible, I loved how you kept the story relevant to the original hp but made changes to the plot, giving us so many more levels of depth and emotions in the story

i don't know how long ago you wrote this and wether r not you'll see this but you're pretty friggin great at writing. from the beginning

I can't seem to find Marked. Are you by chance still writing it?

It's so exciting!