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   NovemberDreamin chapter 6 . 9/14/2019 the slow burn beginssss! poor Ron though, I'm glad you aren't going to make him evil but I hope that means he gets to feel better soon! |
| NovemberDreamin chapter 4 . 9/14/2019 woah, that was a surprise! whats in that potion anyway? |
| NovemberDreamin chapter 3 . 9/14/2019 aw Ron, bless his heart! again, loving the characters being in character & the dialogue is so good too! |
| NovemberDreamin chapter 2 . 9/14/2019 ooh, the tension is building! love that you keep them in character instead of falling for each other right away :) |
| Tg chapter 4 . 9/3/2019 Overall, I'm enjoying this story, so far. I am however, compelled to say this here, Ron is not dumb. He's not as book smart as Hermione, nor as introspective as Harry, but he's also not a moron. That's something something we can blame on the movies, the director deliberately made Ron seem stupid to make Harry, and Hermione look smarter. |
| Lilaho chapter 30 . 8/31/2019 Oh my gosh what a story. I wish J.K. had somehow put some of your ideas in her books. So good, so unique and your characters are so awesome without feeling strange. I really love your Snape and his comments. They really made me laugh. Also the dialogs between Hermoine and Draco were just perfect. So witty, funny, heartbreaking... I'm sorry for not leaving a comment on every chapter, you truly would have deserved it, but I had to read it in one go. And I'm so happy you wrote a sequel to it I can't wait to begin. So thank you so much for this reading experience. You are a great writer, I love it! |
| SixMagnitudeGirl chapter 31 . 8/26/2019 Thank you for writing this fanfiction. It brought much romance in my gray and mundane life.I really loved the setting and it's not OOC which is even better. I just wish I can visualize the gowns etc. (hahahaha I like fashionSo I will be spending my whole day reading your next story. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/16/2019 Hermione wasn't fully present and knew it yet still went ahead, so unfair to Ron. Her rushing to have sex with Ron when they had barely kissed and never been on a date felt entirely too OC. |
| Guest chapter 30 . 8/12/2019 Loved this so much so well written and a fab story |
| Aisti chapter 30 . 8/8/2019 Great writing as always! |
| FemmeBrulee chapter 30 . 8/6/2019 I really enjoyed this ride, from the slow burn romance, to your spot on characterization and lovely writing style. |
| FemmeBrulee chapter 22 . 8/4/2019 Woah what just happened here? Anyway, love this story for the way the romance is built up - all those mutual pining scenes got me feeling it in my heart! Also really liked the memory sequences here and the way you've written Narcissa. Excited to read on! |
| hermionespolyjuice chapter 30 . 8/2/2019 Wow! The most wonderfully written piece of work that took the readers on one hell of a ride. You captured the characters and the storyline exquisitely and I cannot wait to go and read your sequel right now! Thank you for sharing with us your work and your talent! |
| pascaux chapter 30 . 7/13/2019 Thank you for writing this amazing story, I honestly could not put it down! It was ao well written. I cannot wait to start Marked |
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/10/2019 Brilliant |