Reviews for Clean |
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catita55555 chapter 17 . 12/15/2018 I'm a little over half way and I can tell this story is going to break me *sigh* |
catita55555 chapter 14 . 12/15/2018 I need a kiss like that in my life... |
catita55555 chapter 11 . 12/15/2018 Uff, the scene at the library WAS hot! |
catita55555 chapter 10 . 12/15/2018 I audibly sighed at the end of this chapter. your character development is really good. |
catita55555 chapter 7 . 12/15/2018 Oof saucy! so into this chapter! |
Guest chapter 30 . 11/15/2018 Great story |
LucyLocketinDracosPocket chapter 31 . 11/7/2018 Hello, I found your story a couple of days ago and I havent been able to put it down. You take the reader on such a journey of discovery through the characters and open up so many possibilities for them as well. I really have enjoyed this and look forward to the sequel which I'm about to read! Fantastic writing! Thank you! |
Whit96 chapter 30 . 11/6/2018 Oh how I love this! I be read it a couple of times. You are my favorite writer. |
GalwayGirl2 chapter 30 . 10/30/2018 This was such a delight to read! It was recommended through this weekly fanfic email I get and I never turn down a chance to luxuriate in some Dramione. I think you did a great job with the characters and I love how you meandered away from canon but still preserved it- I'm working on my own fic set during HBP and struggle with this incessantly. Excited to start the sequel! |
youknees chapter 6 . 10/27/2018 Too much tension. Oh my! |
youknees chapter 1 . 10/26/2018 First time reading this. And wow. You captured me in the first chapter. Can’t wait to read more. |
She'sLikeTexas chapter 30 . 10/26/2018 Holy cow, I know its been a few years since you've written this story, but I can't begin to say enough wonderful things about it. Every piece of this first part was enthralling, and I loved the twists and turns. I was never a Dramione shipper, but DAMN I get enough of it now. Your story has been the best I've read by far, and I can't wait to keep reading onto Marked... Thank you for writing this. Everything about it was perfect! |
WriteAwayMaam chapter 30 . 10/20/2018 SUPER job! excellent writing! wonderful plot—characterization that fits both canon and your plot! this was so easy to read—the plot easy to follow, although it was a complex plot, in my opinion. It’s obvious that you took great pains in writing this story well, as the plot was complex and unique and your writing thoughtful! great story! i can’t wait to read the sequel! |
WriteAwayMaam chapter 1 . 10/18/2018 this was your first story!? the first chapter is excellent! can’t wait to read more! great work! |
GwendyMary chapter 3 . 10/17/2018 Argh I can't help but think that the scene where they kiss is totally wrongLike you described, it is definitely mismatched |