Reviews for If I Die Young
Guest chapter 1 . 9/4
is Dorcas gay? cause that's not right. weird.
jlo123 chapter 14 . 8/6
I really hope you continue to the end. Not enough fics go into detail of their time with the order of the Phoenix, married life or even baby Harry.
Sushma chapter 14 . 5/12
Oh, my, GOD!
This is the first fic of Lily and James, I read, and it is the best.
It just sounds so natural, so perfect. It isn't forced at all and I felt as though, this was meant to happen, it will always happen no matter how many times the cycle repeats. Ever Lily has her James and every James has his Lily. The are meant to be. And everything happens so fast, the fall in love fast, the marry fast and...they die fast.
I love you for spinning this tale.
Thank you, so much.
Guest chapter 13 . 8/27/2017
Absolutely brilliant
sapphiregirl1020 chapter 14 . 7/6/2017
what a stunning story! beautifully written xx
leylisfriends2000 chapter 14 . 5/23/2017
Hey, could we have a short one shot of james' first cinema experience.
Toeroesa chapter 14 . 4/4/2017
Loved your fanfic. Very well written, very good character developement, too.
Is it finished already? I hope not, please update :-)
Jily71102 chapter 14 . 3/15/2017
Love Lily's emotions building up in this!
niknik0201 chapter 14 . 2/11/2017
Great chapter!
Summerbelle chapter 14 . 2/6/2017
I've just finished this enchanting love Ve story between
Two beautiful people on the inside as well as the outsid e
And your an exceptional writer. Who can draw readers
In and happily get them hooked on how you can ring
Your characters to life plus I'm hoping to read some more of your brilliant storytelling as lily and James
Might be hard to beat, yet stranger things could
Happen you might find some other marauder people
You like enough to put down no matter if fan fiction
Cause trouble I. Love your summerbelle
Summerbelle chapter 12 . 2/6/2017
What a fantastic ending to a truly magical story of the ups and downs of lily and James so yes you do own them
As they were already dead in the movies yet you really
Did bring them to life while they were at hog warts plus
They're friends obviously not the rat but the others so
Thank you for doing that it was extremely great. But I'm
Running out of power so I'll have to finish this great
Love story later in the day,coldly might have killed these two wonderful people though their true love will endure
And I'm hoping herded regrets summerbelle
Summer belle chapter 10 . 2/6/2017
Trust the death eaters to ruin a beautiful evening for
James and lily yet while they might be shocked all
That will happen is that their combined bravery, honesty
Etc will stand the test of time and they'll fight and love
Which mouldy Voldemort loathes as he doesn't have a
Heart and everyone knows love reigns supreme so
While they die young they'll forever be eternally
Happy with the wisdom that they won in the end.
Thank you for this story however the sandman is calling me to for now. Love summer belle.
Summerbelle chapter 9 . 2/6/2017
This is very very entertaining you might not own anything to do with the Harry Potter family yet you've
Brought them to life through fan fiction ,and that makes you thoroughly amazing not that many writers have
That ability plus I'm a speed reader of books and you
Have an inspiring unique style of writing that I'm hoping
You'll keep on doing the world needs writers like yourself
So please never forget that the Harry Potter world
Belongs to everyone even though jk Rowling wrote
Them,I'm loving summerbelle
Summer belle chapter 8 . 2/6/2017
This is a truly wonderful story that's very hard to stop
Reading but it's getting quite late so I'm going to stop
And return to finishing reading this marvellous story
Tomorrow as soon as I wake up,it will set me up for
The rest of the day I'll be laughing singing just so very
Happy and that's been entirely thanks to your great
Writing about my favourite magical people from
Hog warts,all of the upsets hopefully will work out
Remember your loyal fans love your writing and they
Always summerbelle
Summerbelle chapter 6 . 2/6/2017
This time it's lily being the dumb. One as James has jusrealised she's the one for him yet because of the
Pranks she doesn't believe him, yet jealousy works
Both ways so I'm hoping she receives a very good
Dose of it he's okay but young and foolish being a
Crazy teenager its natural. However as soulmate so
Nothing will be perfect nor would you want it to be.
A truly great story grips the imagination you've done
That in spades ,I'm going to finish this and have very
Pleasant dreams indeed. Love summer belle
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