So, I’ve not even started reading the actual story yet, but I am reading the dumb challenge bit. What’s the thought process behind James and Lily knowing Youkai but Angels, which they are more likely to know because of being in Europe, isn’t an option?

Youkai are half a world away and predominantly in Kyoto. Lmao.

Surnames are last names, so Rias' helmet would have a G, not an R on the same for Akeno's wouldn't be an A.

the Requirement with harry being courtous etc because he is english is a hell of a big prejudice sadlyhistorically you have to look for their history with ireland and especially scottland and you kinda have a picture that is...
and its multiple instances over a long durstion
canonwise from hp with the wizarding world its even worse in some cases since the behaviour still holds up quiete a bit longer than in historically.

kinda wonder what they did to be able to whitewash that whole history.

honestly really question how they were able to get that bias (from james bond movies maybe?)
germany somehow still has that whole holocaust and racism stigma sadly even though it was a long time ago too. and funnily enough that happened because most were tricked and then afraid of one person who strangely enough was an immigrant who went into politics

still gonna give it a read though probably

Okay, you lost me with his actions of taking Sona's Clipboard. Stealing stuff to attract a girl's attention? Seriously? That's kindergarten level. And in High School, it's bullying. Okay, he got punched for it, but being punished doesn't make him less of an ass.

And I don't like your views on relationships. He is allowed to sleep with girls when he wants because he's a healthy male, but he'll only be in a serious relationship with a girl who doesn't have sex on the first date? Why? A girl confident in her sexuality is not good girlfriend material? Only men are allowed to have fun before commitment? If they have sex fast, they are just holes to fill?

And don't get me started with your fake "respect" of women with the "you can peep all you want, but don't steal underwears". No. You don't peep. Everybody is allowed their privacy, and they get to choose when and to whom they show their bodies. Peeping rob them of that privacy, and even if it doesn't hurt physically, it can and does hurt mentally. It's a violation like any other.

And this was marked complete for what reason?

Great chapter more please

I think Rias and Akeno better get used to the odd and inevitable happening around Harry. I wonder if Harry will end up battling the mad exorcist Freed?

I would have made James a Pawn.

I’m simply curious why anyone thinks that a mundane marriage would hold any sway in the underworld

lily's revival sentence is the same as black lentern's sentence

property not propriety, Sona speaking to Irina.

Great story some wrong used words but I'm enjoying it.

A person who is said to have a stiff upper lip displays fortitude and stoicism in the face of adversity, or exercises great self-restraint in the expression of emotion.

The phrase is most commonly heard as part of the idiom "keep a stiff upper lip", and has traditionally been used to describe an attribute of British people in remaining resolute and unemotional when faced with adversity.

A sign of fear is trembling of the upper lip, hence the saying keep a "stiff" upper lip.

A strange way to end this wonderful story - I hope that there is going to be a sequel as I believe that there is a lot more of the story to go - please update with said sequel as soon as it is possible to write it.

Thank you in advance.

- Mark A Heffron ( Plymouth, UK ) -

Looked it up it kaichou means chairman.

I dont understand why Harry had so much trouble identifying Sona's clan. Shitori is LITERALLY how you pronounce Sitri since the Si syllable doesn't exactly exist in that language and gets automatically replaced by a Shi. e.g. Sirius would be both written and produced Shiriussu in Japanese.