Reviews for The expelled Jedi
Guest chapter 19 . 6/20
How dare you call your english crap. You should be ashamed if yourself. This story need s a leather copy
finnavx chapter 8 . 4/27
Defect2 instead of defecated
kerry.wallace40 chapter 19 . 3/4
This is a great fanfiction that only has spelling and repeats of certain lines as a minor problem. Why do so many do this.
Hikari Nova chapter 8 . 2/14
it's Aayla'Secura {Aayla Secura in non-twilik} and a fun fic so far even with the missing words/letters in some places
Guest chapter 1 . 2/3
What good is starting up another damn story when you have already proven that you cant even finish the one you were on just pathetic
SantoryuSekai chapter 19 . 12/27/2017
Waiting for you more chapters of the other story I've just read(RBT The expelled Jedi). You can leave that Naruto plus GM Luke or Jean Gray, the force telekineses and used in very low proportions in the fanfic. Being that to beings that destroy solar system with her.
SantoryuSekai chapter 17 . 12/27/2017
Their stories are always great.
This idea of a Naruto King / Emperor or Ruler of worlds and little used.
SantoryuSekai chapter 16 . 12/27/2017
You can explain the fact that it is OP in a flashback for example, Anakin is OP just because it has high Midi chlorians. I do not see what's wrong with Naruto.
And this Naruto is not even OP. Overpower is the GM Luke who makes supernovas with the force (it does so sun if they collide) teleports to any place of the galaxy, feels presence in other planes of existence, strips planets of orbit with the force. That is to be OP in the Star Wars universe.
Guest chapter 19 . 12/24/2017
You have no idea what a Mary Sue is it seems, and tf you mean op? What crazy ass shit was he doing, I didn't seem him with chakra spamming Biju bombs so wtf bro wtf
Guest chapter 14 . 12/17/2017
i like it a lot keep it up
Blood4my chapter 19 . 11/28/2017
whit all respect but i like the expeled jedi more as the rewrite i thinbk this have more soul it what other not what everyone tipe
Guest chapter 3 . 10/11/2017
Go fucking die in a hole and take this pece of shit with you
Rafael moraes chapter 2 . 9/29/2017
olha eu gostei desse encontro familiar entre naruto,kushina e o antepassado de naruto. Principalmente entre naruto e kushina foi emocionante.
Guest chapter 15 . 9/13/2017
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
outlawreaper22 chapter 1 . 9/13/2017
please don't delete this version still very good and I'd preferb old version over new though it's good to
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