Reviews for Time Shift Woe
Astromormy chapter 17 . 3/10/2020

Seriously, this story is amazing. I'm loving the dynamic you have between Danny and Vlad where they're both arguably terrified of each other. After this chapter, it feels like they're finally starting to come to an understanding, or at least Vlad is. I can't wait for when Danny finally realizes this Vlad isn't that same from his future.

I also *loved* how you mixed in the tale of three brothers. If you continue that plot line, having Danny meet up with Death would all kinds of exciting. And as for the horecruxes, Danny could potentially find the diadem given his friendship with the Gray Lady.

Also, just as my own idea and suggestion, have you considered having Danny meet some of his other past enemies, like Desiree and Box Ghost or Techbus and Skulker. You wouldn't need to throw in all of them, one or two would be fine, but it would reinforce what Danny's only just now starting to learn, that ghosts aren't all bad. A parable of that old saying, maybe, where if you meet a jerk in the morning, you met a jerk, but if you meet jerks all day, you're the jerk.

Heck, if you wanted to, Danny could even start a romance with Desiree.

Can't wait for the next update. Good luck.
TwilightWakerofTime chapter 16 . 2/20/2020
Oh my goodness. I really, REALLY love this fic. I cannot begin to describe how incredibly sad I am that I made it to the end. Binging it was such an enjoyable experience! I really love how you portray Danny in this story, and this plot is so unique and refreshing! I love how Harry and Ron think that Danny is working with Snape to steal the Sorcerer's Stone, and I love how Vlad just showed up out of nowhere and is so different from his future self (and Danny is struggling to see that), and Luna is so amazingly good as an OC villain. I think it was an excellent choice to pick Danny from earlier on the series as well; seeing him trying to figure out his ice powers without assistance is very fun to read. (Although I have to wonder why Clockwork didn't think to recruit Danny after he'd masted his powers more haha.)

I sincerely enjoyed this, and I cannot wait for another chapter. Honestly, I never review stories, but this one has such a shockingly low number of reviews compared to its quality, so I had to leave my appreciation. You deserve so much love for this; it's such a great fic. Thank you very much for this and I hope life sorts itself out so you can update soon! I'm very eager to read more.
The ChocoGoat chapter 16 . 10/29/2019
YESSSS! Ahahaha great stuff.i look forward to a continuation, if you so choose
The ChocoGoat chapter 2 . 10/25/2019
Ah, is this Movie Nick? That's such a nice change from the usual dreary book Nick
Illusn chapter 16 . 7/21/2019
I'm so excited to see where this story goes! I have so many questions, and I'm loving every moment of this story!
kimcat chapter 16 . 7/8/2019
Finally Danny is being less of a dick to Vlad lol wonder if Danny will mess up and give away his Fenton name at some point lol.

Can't wait for the next one
Astromormy chapter 16 . 7/7/2019
I am loving the dynamic Danny has between Luna and Vlad respectively. I'm hoping they manage to work together and become partners successfully. As for Luna, I really like her. If there was a romantic pairing in this fic, I'd vote for LunaXDanny.

Oh, and if Danny should run into one of his old foes, I'd be interested in seeing him run into Desiree before she becomes his enemy. Maybe they'd end up becoming friends.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/3/2019
But Danny? Doesn’t need oxygen in his ghost form?
Phoenix-Inferno18 chapter 15 . 6/23/2019
This story is everything I’ve ever wanted out of a Harry Potter story and more! I love it!
2000DragonArmy chapter 15 . 6/22/2019
Glad you're back! love the chapter!
kimcat chapter 15 . 6/22/2019
Awe poor confused Vlad. Maybe Danny will get that stick outta his ass long enough to realize if he teies to help the baby vladdie ghost he would be way better off.

Can't wait for the next one
chicaalterego chapter 14 . 5/27/2018
Nice story so far. I’m wondering if the doc will end on first year or we will be getting to the HP book with the chamber of secret. Of course, this ain’t me asking, since I plan to be surprised one way or the other :D
chicaalterego chapter 11 . 5/27/2018
Wow! First fic I read with a time-traveling Danny that I find good... it was such a ridiculous long wait for such a thing to happen I almost didn’t pick it up due been let down too many times, but this is great!

Gonna keep an eye on it for sure :)
Guest chapter 14 . 4/1/2018
Booyah! Great chapter! I love the world-building that your story has! Really makes it its own unique story instead of a mediocre re-telling with extra characyers. Once again, you've nailed the characters! I love it!
Guest chapter 12 . 4/1/2018
I love how you've worked these misconceptions and misunderstandings! I love it!
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