|Reviews for The Bald and The Esper|
| turcanganer chapter 17 . 6/10
Second book plssss
| iSee21 chapter 16 . 5/3
yeah will wait for the second book
| ErisFootWorshipper chapter 17 . 4/22
Still waiting for the second book...
| Daethalion chapter 14 . 3/24
I like the concept of the story and the changes in Saitama thanks to being paired with someone who isn't a complete hero worshiper like Genos started out as.
That said, I feel like the text could really use a proofreader. The grammatical structure is clumsy, the sentences flow like tangled knots, and there's jumping between past and present tense all over the place - frequently in the same line. The errors make what would be an overall good read into a tedious struggle. Are you planning to revisit and clean it up at any point?
| Guest chapter 17 . 2/28
is this discontinued?
| ZokuTheSkeleton chapter 15 . 2/26
Sigh...The Monster Association
| ZokuTheSkeleton chapter 12 . 2/26
In a Alternate Universe where Saitama wasn’t there...:
OH GOD SOMEONE HELP US IM GONNA FUCKING DIE FROM THIS METEOR AHHHHHHHHH!
| obey2084 chapter 17 . 2/8
It was great going through and reading this. Very interesting change to the canon, and I’m intrigued by your decisions on how to write outside the lines. It showed you have a good sense of reason when you did so.
Tatsumaki was entertaining, although at times her development jumped in random directions. Overall she’s a good character with complicated traits, resulting from how she acquired her power. But what I really enjoyed was the experiences she went through in humility, and that’s my greatest takeaway from this tale.
I’ll be sure to check out more of your work!
| Storylover Vodhr chapter 17 . 1/12
A very fun story, and one I hope I will one day see a sequel for.
Regardless, I loved it, and hope that you are prospering well. Thank you greatly for your enjoyable story.
| ErisFootWorshipper chapter 17 . 11/3/2020
I am one of those,
seasun twu plz
| mistalenny chapter 10 . 10/13/2020
Glad to see Genus back in the story. His input on why Saitama is so powerful was informative
| Guest chapter 17 . 8/31/2020
When season two of the show is done
You gotta make the sequel to this
I gotta say that I kind of like this tatsumaki more than the original and think she's a better companion than Genos
I mean Genos is cool and all but sometimes he lacks personality
Basically what I'm saying is I want more
So when its possible
Please make a sequel
| HandMansRight chapter 17 . 8/6/2020
This was a really fun read. It's not just simple "what if Genos and Tornado switched places" (but it's still there if that's what you are looking for), but also a great delving into the complicated character of Tatsumaki, which we had hints of in the Anime and Manga and fully realized only in the original webcomic. It is also a great de- and reconstruction of the Genos/Saitama dynamic from the source material, and how Saitama and his philosophy of simplicity affects people around him. I hope we will see a sequel or continuation of this story, as fanfictions of this quality are not that common.
To the author: I am glad you published this story. Keep up the good work.
| Gyro2020 chapter 17 . 7/14/2020
Me and the boys waiting for Season 2
Amazing story one of my favorite
| samuelcaldeira76gmail.com chapter 17 . 5/25/2020
Thanks for the chapter hope you continue this story