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Bah, modern lore. Cawl? Primaris? Never happened.

Stay safe, and keep kitty safe.

a new episode! awesome! nice twist! will go read up on regular eldars now.. not really sure about yvrainne's backstory.. also need to find out who lobo is.. finally hang in there. I hope your cat gets better.. will pm..

I'm sorry about what happened to your cat, I hope he's feeling better now.

great chapter! finally caught up by basically skipping the 3 pervious chapters I have not read yet.. had to catch up.. but wow! great intrigue... will be interesting to see what the fallout with the slaves will be.. and what double dealing vloks and raks cook up.. will they team up to form the VR connection?..

also is lelith is coming back. she was great and added another angle to the polygon of intrigue...

ending with the chosen one? is the musical omake finally happening?

Reviews for the review throne.

So Commorragh is heading for a second apocalypse and Vect is making preparations? Not only that, but poor Temira has now gained the Supreme Overlord's favor as his "chosen" one. I can't help feeling like she's some sort of sacrificial lamb for whatever plot Vect hopes to put into motion.

god this chapter was perfect

Well, this is going to get very... unpleasant. Temira's screwed, Vect's got her dancing on his strings and now... yeah. Honestly, I'm curious if Vlokarian might know a way to transplant Temmy's soul into a Drukhari body.

"Will she be interesting enough to be more than just a torture slave?"

...

No, no she won't.

I think this chapter needs some touch up, cause the use of italics if confusing. Italics ate usually used for thoughts and past tense story telling, but it seems like this entire chapter is full of it and I'm trying to understand if any is thoughts, speech, or past tense storytelling. Very confusing.

Jesus, I can't believe how much of an evil bastard Vect is. Wow. I mean, just...wow. The sheer lengths that he would go, the various plans within plans...what an absolute piece of shit.
Great work with the writing, though - it was atmospheric and eerie, almost kind of dream-like when Temira ends up doing his bidding. What happened to Lisbeth is truly heartbreaking, and really, REALLY makes me want Temira to have some sort of happy ending, but it seems like that will never happen for her, unfortunately.

Oh my.

congrats on another chapter! will post a longer review once I get done reading it :-)

This is such an amazing story, you write beautifully and so evocatively that it feels like I'm really seeing everything happen. Thank you for keeping at it so long.