Reviews for Harry Potter and the Problem with Life Debts
DrReadnoShit chapter 2 . 7/22
I don't get why authors try to bring comedy into situations where someone is injured, in this case tortured, and clearly needs medical attention.
TBWL713 chapter 2 . 7/12
The constant joking about Harry and Fleur really felt wrong. She has just been attacked, is nearly gang-raped, is unconscious, and is only covered by a blanket, yet Sirius and Bellatrix are joking about her like nothing is wrong.

Also, why tf is he fighting like Sherlock? I'm not gonna be reading any further but I hope Dumbledore and Bellatrix have been training him since he was 5 and he has the intelligence of a super-genius. Anything else and this best be a crack.
DrackNath chapter 8 . 7/5
Another great story that is dead...i cry
Geurtg chapter 1 . 6/25
Buena historia
rogue7273 chapter 8 . 5/26
well that one has been an interesting read, pity it hasn't been updated since 2016, I did notice the author said it would be slow updates but six years it would be nice to see if it would be continued, on hiatus, abandoned or up for adoption, there is just so much that could be done with the story line that has been created
steve.moore.9081323 chapter 8 . 5/19
Great story most interesting take on harry potter
steve.moore.9081323 chapter 1 . 5/19
Good start looking forward to reading the rest of the story
AlphaFlash chapter 4 . 4/26
Taliesin The Eternal Bard chapter 6 . 4/25
I donate I know if you intended it or not but in the flash back or not but as I read this chapter. The section where Bella reads the note from the phone booth. That so sounds like Vernon.
TheArcaneToaster chapter 8 . 4/7
That is a really good read.
I particularly like how you present changes to the canon retrospectively all in due time instead of throwing everything at once. Although those parts feel a bit overstretched, they're perfectly fine fine if you're planning on making this story quite longer than usual (and what you wrote so far, does feel as if you you were planning on making it last).
I really hope that you haven't abandoned this story. Looking forward to the next chapters. Keep up the good work.
Ltbutterfly287 chapter 4 . 3/9
The way wizards execute someone is with a dementors kiss. No one in the ministry knows what the veil does or what happens to those who walk through it. The things is located in the unspeakables research area for a reason.
Taliesin The Eternal Bard chapter 8 . 2/22
Do you have any real objection I have to the store you overall Is It's difficult to keep track of in story time of the day.
bobel1990 chapter 8 . 2/16
cool Story nice Au .
50k Words in 5 years tho ughh
AlphaFlash chapter 7 . 2/12
fortinpatric chapter 8 . 2/7
Merci pour le chapitre
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