Hahaha! I forgot about Marge. Ooof... this is going to be fun.

This chapter was so beautiful and touching...
Masterfully written!

Currently rereading the I-series , and although a few months back, having read the available content I had left a review...However, after reliving these amazing scenes written by you, i felt the urge to drop a praising comment, because you truly deserve it!
The ambiance, the conversations, the characters are handled with such authenticity that it seems like I'm reading the original work of JKR for the first time, once again. Believe me when I say it, if there's magic in this world, it is woven in your stories. I feel privileged to be able to experience it for free, and I deeply appreciate the energy and time you invest in this project!
I wish you all the best, and thank you :)

I don't get it. Sirius knows there's a hidden room in that corridor, right there. It's where Dumbledore stashed his bike. He knows he had no idea the room was there before. He knows it's not on the map. And even if he didn't remember, somehow, Dumbledore would. It's way too obvious what's happening here and *he should know*.

This would've been the best one in this series if it wasn't for the silly climax, author. That rather dragged the whole thing down. Still worth a 7/10 though.

I miss Quirrel. He was a damn sight better at villainy than this. This is even more pathetic than bullying an 11 year old girl.

You had a very good scene with Peter dragging around Harry in the forest though, author. It'd be a great scene if it wasn't built on unreasonable amounts of incompetence from everyone. As I've commented before a few times, plotting is where you screw up hardest and it's extra disappointing because you can do so much better.

Maybe Crouch has a side plan happening that's actually smart while this nonsense is going on here? We can only hope.

There must be a curse on the third year climax like the defense teacher position to explain why it's always built on people being very dumb even in fanfictions.

My estimation of your writing is plummeting once again, author. You're certainly a roller coaster.

Welp, so much for good planning on badguys' behalf. A whole year of scheming and this is what they came up with? Take hostages? Peter could've done that on his first day hiding at school. And sticking around here where Dumby can get him? And on the day the Minister (who's just about dumb enough to order dementors inside) is visiting? He had one cool idea with the shrieking shack diversion but did nothing with the time it gave him. He also cornered himself, he's not getting out of Hogwarts even if he gets the cloak.

Not that good guys are being any smarter (except, shockingly, Ron). Sirius is thinking particularly stupid thoughts but they're all extra idiotic for messing around like that. Peter (a mass murderer) has an extra hostage he can kill if he feels like it and they don't know if he smuggled or imperiused an accomplice or two. Not to mention they didn't even demand to see Ron and Hermione, for all they know the kids are already dead and Peter is just mimicking their voices with his wand.

Then again none of this even remotely approaches the sheer dumbfuckery of the shrieking shack sequence of the orginal book where every single person involved were utterly brainless. So, you know, you made an improvement, author.

See, you're perfectly capable of writing a good mystery, author. Your Crouch Jr and even Peter are good villains, like Quirrel was.

That's why your last story was disappointing, Tom was lame (possibly because he was a snot nosed prick of a teen) and you also displayed his every move. This story is immesurably better on badguys front.

Being threatened by some lunatic mass murderer on first date is still less fucked up than what Cho and Harry had going on in the books. So maybe it'll work out in this story. Even if not, I like this series of events. You're doing well with plotting on this one, author.

Dunno why this Dmitri guy thinks he'd get blood of the enemy from Petunia but I'm glad he does. This is the most entertaining turn of events in this story, author.

Considering how unimpressively similar the last story's plot was to the original book, I'm expecting better from what seems to be fake Moody on year 3. You could do even better and NOT do fake Moody too, author. That way you can have a mystery that the reader doesn't already know.

Why do HP characters preparing to destroy it always stop to listen what the locket has to say? It's almost like they think just stabbing the dang thing as soon as it opens isn't dramatic enough.

What a beautiful final chapter! The patronus part brought a few happy tears to my eyes. I can't thank you enough for these stories. They've been my happy place lately.

Absolutely cackling at Sirius' letter here. He is the king of passive aggressive and Snape is going to regret everything.

I took a break from reading this series to give my eyes a break and read a couple of physical, non-electronic books, but I'm back now and it feels like coming home. I'm so incredibly invested in this series and I'm so glad that you, dear author, seem to be just as invested in finishing it. Thank you.