What the hell.. There so many error from this story.. Ughh ur story sucks

That's the best thing I have ever read Evan better than rainbow rowell when's u next story coming out

Although awfully cringe in some parts. This story is a decent read. I'll be willing to read any future chapter you have planned for this. Maybe try to pick it up with a more solid story line? Like what happened with orehimes hollow.. or how come zangetsu is back in control? Could you explain that a little too. Coz it was a little hectic and I didn't fully understand who the 'prisoners' were and what the hell she was doing in a sex dungeon in the first place. And did ichigo come to some sort of agreement with zangetsu or what...

Otherwise keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to the next update!

I like how tender Ichigo was here.

This chapter was interesting and I really hope to see more chapters soon. Keep up the good work man!

this was funny

What The Fuck I am Lost

Good story! I like all of the drama and problems that they have. Well, not like that but you know what I mean. It's good for the plot.
Please keep updating!

This would be even more funny if both orihime and the baby died brutally and ichigo and hollow were the cause of it and ichigo hangs himself killing both him and the hollow because he's all three races his soul implodes when he dies so no hueco mundo or soul society for him you should get rid of this its cheezy and a stupid concept and when you made ichigo have that "Nightmare" just showed one of your sick fanticies you pedophile

This chapter was scary for me

LOOOOOL

Lol this is funny

You should have Ichigo and Orihime hollow meet up.

Orihime's not gonna die is she?

she isn't going to die right?