|Reviews for The Female Alpha (Complete)|
| twilight80 chapter 33 . 10/7
Luna needs to grow a pair and not be so scared more of a badass
| shamcaster chapter 12 . 4/21
Are you sure she's a female alpha I don't think so, I mean she's a fucking offence.
| xuanny chapter 5 . 4/20
I wish she would stop and step up and be a baddass bitch and protect herself. defend herself. where is the alpha female? not her yet
| Odeveca chapter 1 . 4/19
I love your story! :)
Thank you for directing me to it.
| Guest chapter 26 . 12/7/2017
Love your story!Your an amazing writer!Keeep on writing!
| Gracfully chapter 2 . 8/17/2017
like it I do
| DuskyDark chapter 2 . 4/3/2017
I really like this. English may not be your native language but your usage of its grammar is better than most whose is.
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/5/2017
I couldn't finish the story, even though it had a good plot...the writing was...odd. And if you rewrite it I'm sure it'll become better.
| I'mImmortal chapter 36 . 2/18/2017
Where's the rewritten version?
| dutchlatingirl chapter 1 . 11/14/2016
Dutchie hierooooo, vind het nu al te gek girlll
| NikitaNightfall chapter 35 . 10/31/2016
Do a re-write please
| Dreams and Desire chapter 35 . 10/27/2016
I would love to see a date if you go ahead with rewriting the story.
| man1999hotmail.com chapter 35 . 10/27/2016
Yes re-write it was good but you could make it even better
| The undiscovered Gypsie chapter 2 . 10/18/2016
You speak better English than me, but then I am Australian.
Awesome story! Everything flows so well too
| mNmcswain chapter 34 . 8/11/2016
phenomenal! cannot wait tk read the second book! and hey, just so you know, for having English as a second language, you're doing amazing! there are some grammer mistakes, yes, but im impressed! great job!