|Reviews for The Demonic and The Blind|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/18
i miss this
| Autismguy593 chapter 1 . 3/17/2019
Like the one-shot
| Concolor44 chapter 1 . 12/29/2018
Well. That was certainly out of left field.
| Merkoid chapter 1 . 8/7/2018
This is so not fair, this is the type of story that needs to have multiple chapters, instead of just leaving it hanging right there.
| Korin Dragoon chapter 1 . 7/1/2018
This could be a good fic, telling Hazel's story, even if just in flashbacks, how she and Raven met, their courtship, what happened after they got together, and if Raven says yes, to years down the road with their kids.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2017
Only flaw I saw, is inherent in the DC-verse. They have access to all sorts of tech and geniuses. Yet, when they're injured they refuse to make use of it, or don't even think of it.
Babs is paralyzed? Let's ignore that Dick used to be teammates with Victor Stone and that his dad's technology could get her walking again.
How about a certain Bat asking an Alien Boyscout for help? And depending ion timeframe, timelines and the varying Crises.
Not as if one of her best female friends happens to be a blonde from Argos.
How does this relate to this story?
Victor again. Should be familiar enough with magic to make tech resistant/immune to it.
Toss in League knowledge surrounding individuals like Metallic, or what the Lantern Corps know of healing.
And getting her sight back should be possible. Even if the optic nerves are gone. The tech exists, Victor again, to interact directly with the area of the brain regulating sight.
But like I said, this is a flaw inherent in the source material, and as such not your fault. And I'm not going to chide you for staying true to the source material. That would be asinine to the extreme, as far as I'm concerned.
| ElementalMaster16 chapter 1 . 10/30/2016
pretty interesting one-shot. i do think i would've preferred something bigger though. because there's way too many things left unsaid or unanswered.
| ArchAngelGundam chapter 1 . 4/29/2016
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
Please continue this. Do an adorable scene between Raven's demonic side (all instincts and aggression) and Hazel. If you can, add purring and a possessive cuddle by Raven.
| miu.sakurai.73 chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
| Blitzstrahl chapter 1 . 3/15/2016
why is she blind?
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 1 . 3/6/2016
I like it a lot! **
| ShadowCub chapter 1 . 2/27/2016
Canon Raven was sexy as fuck! Liked this a lot.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2016
I love it
| JBebe chapter 1 . 2/19/2016
Oh, what a cool pairing. Very much enjoyed your story and definitely wouldn't mind if you revisited this pairing again in the future!