Reviews for But Its Better If You Do |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow asgore, hiii! |
![]() ![]() Hello I stumbled on this fic and have found it quite interesting so far. I think your a really great author counsidering you came back after two years! I've found so many good fics that just end and the author never comes back so you've really impressed me. Don't take the following as ride but I have a couple questions regarding Frisk. You see I innitaly thought that she ran away because perhaps her mother got a boyfriend who was abusing Frisk eather sexually of physically. I thought sexually was the most likely considering I've seen so many stories go that route but then in the last chapter said she's a vergin so my initial thought was out. So I'm wondering why she ran away. There still could have been an abusive boyfriend or perhaps after her father's death her mom could have become an alcoholic and began to take her grief out on frisk. Either way Frisk gets abused and runs away. Would frisk have any evidence of her abuse like scars besides her self inflicted ones? I think that could be an interesting thing to add, for it'd be away for other characters to see what she's been through and why she ran away. Or pehaps she could have PTSD and have a freakout when someone picks up a glass bottel or something. These are just my thoughts and questions. I think your work is great and it doesn't really need my two cents. |
![]() ![]() ![]() dang, i really should watch the movie can't wait for the next favored chapter! luvs luvs |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mett and Papy going on a confusing roller coaster there. Anyway, I'm so glad you updated. Yeay, thanks for the new, longer chapter! Oooh, girl, do I adore Sans and Frisk here. They're so cute, so sweet, this Frans shipper heart is going to have diabetes. You did wonderful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back! I'm so happy I found this fic. The plot, the characters, dialogues, and SANS, everything is perfect. SO FOLLOWING THIS. Wouldn't have guessed such masterpiece exists. Thank you for not scrapping this beautiful fic. I'm more into long chapters since the fun and anticipation and our beloved characters last longer too, but I'll bite whatever you give me. You're the author after all! And please, please stay safe 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually had to reeread this from the beginning because my memory was so hazy, and then I was reminded why I subscribed in the first place! Your story is so good! I'm so happy you're doing better and that you're back! Looking forward to what you have next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, so good! Poor Frisk and Mettaton. Met is really likable in this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope one day you finish this story I would love to read it with your other works as well |
![]() ![]() Hi, i really enjoy your story and i was wondering, will there be more? It hasnt been updated since 2016 and im really eager to see how this story ends. |
![]() ![]() I came here because of the title (love panic!) but stayed because the story. I must know what happens! It's killing me! Dx 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing, please update! There's a lot of people who'd love to read more of this, including me. This is a great story and I love how you blend all Undertale characters perfectly into the worl of burlesque! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Look I'm figuring writers block or life getting in the way . This story is okay but if I were the writer I would corkscrew and tell flowey no . Frisk is the soul of deterimination regardless the world she's in she's stronger then this . |
![]() ![]() ![]() i had to read it again... the story is so beautiful, please continue... I'll be encouraging you from the other side of the screen :D you're awesome! keep determined |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update!This is sooooo good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this is a Burlesque AU, but why does it seem like you're just rewriting the movie with Undertale characters? |