|Reviews for Unexpected Miracle - Discontinued|
| SuperWG chapter 9 . 8/14/2017
Not to sound cruel but I think discontinuing this might have been the right thing to do. It was going okay until you resurrected Cell and killed the Saiyans. Things really kind of went downhill after that with Cell having more Cell games and the whole 10 say thing again. Then making Krillin ridiculously stronger than 18 and even making him transform (was that Super Saiyan God?). It was kind of a hot mess of repeating what was already done and going wild with things happening that made no sense. As someone else pointed out, the Yamcha bashing was obnoxious too.
So when you write again be mindful of where the story is going. Your romance was on point, but try to avoid rearranging power levels and ressurecting old villains next time.
| SuperWG chapter 4 . 8/13/2017
I wonder where Krillin gets that seemingly endless supply of money from while he doesn't even have a job?
| Nirvash77 chapter 9 . 10/8/2016
Sad to see this story end. You were really on something with this.
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/23/2016
Coward.. Next time do not do things half assed.
| Kitty in the Box chapter 8 . 9/14/2016
OMG i have got to read more of this. one of the best Krillin x 18 fics. so exciting engaging and I'm so invested now. love it.
| bob chapter 8 . 6/30/2016
Please update soon. I love krillin and I love this story. Please update
| yuriko777 chapter 8 . 3/29/2016
stop the void echo baka!
| yuriko777 chapter 7 . 3/29/2016
you really love your jokes
| Nirvash77 chapter 8 . 3/18/2016
I am loving this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| LazuliEva chapter 8 . 3/6/2016
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/6/2016
This fiction is Silly and rushed.
The plot is terrible
| guest chapter 4 . 1/26/2016
Maron's not that bad is she?
| Rythim chapter 3 . 1/23/2016
Whats with the Yamcha bashing, it sucks