Reviews for Surprise!
animatrix chapter 23 . 3/13
Not to be rude or anything...frankly...continue this story after another ten years...the way u write now...the chapters are way tooo short...I mean u rant more than u write...that was the 23rd chapter but u merge all of them and u wud get only six or seven chapters of decent length..harrys summer could easily be covered in four chapters...and in the first chapter u Harry went with Lucius to his room...they were married...in chapter 23...they are not evn properly in love...and Harry was in the tower...be clear about those things...after reading flashbacks of sooo many chapters one is bound to forget the happenings of the first chapter...good luck to u
lol7867 chapter 23 . 12/31/2014
This is really unique and interesting story and you should defiantly continue this story.
Thorilian chapter 23 . 9/18/2014
Pity there's no more plz keep writing I would like to find out how they got together
kirajefferson95 chapter 21 . 6/28/2014
please update this story is amazing.
Kay chapter 4 . 3/19/2014
Draco's middle name is Lucius
Mashkai30 chapter 23 . 12/27/2013
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
Living-In-Bliss chapter 23 . 10/25/2013
noooooooooooooooooooooo this can't be it! I adore this fic! I need more pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaseeeeeeeeeee?!
katelaina1717 chapter 23 . 7/28/2013
Really wish you had finished this fic it seems so interesting.
alex chapter 23 . 4/24/2013
great story, please continue. sex scene please
Guest chapter 23 . 3/3/2013
more than 10 years, please update
cyiusblack chapter 23 . 12/27/2012
update soon
mysteriouswitch chapter 23 . 11/15/2012
Good Story but it was lacking a lot of things
It really had no depth or enough detail
Also stop writing flashbacks because there is too much. If want to write a story write about what had happened and then write the story. Also please finish your story becasause apart from what I wrote it is a good story. This is my email if you want to find out what I mean
SLASHMONSTER eatin yo boys up chapter 12 . 11/10/2012
O_O that asshole he did not just say that to Harry... O_O i feel like punching him in the face and biting off his big toe right now... O_O if he was here right now id totally do it O_O
SLASHMONSTER eatin yo boys up chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
-SCREAMING- AHHHHH no you didnt no you didnt son OMG OMG -still screaming but lower, i woke my little brother- AHahhhhhhhgh!
kuroninja chapter 23 . 9/30/2012
This is a good story. Please continue writing it.
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