Reviews for Eggman's Plan
Zoggerific chapter 1 . 8/2
Huh, it's hard to imagine Sonic saying anything nasty like that. He's normally a very cool-headed individual.
Lynn chapter 7 . 7/24/2017
Good story but when will Robotnik carry out his plan with Amy?
It's well written, I can't wait to read more :).
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2017
Bad bad bad
Lynn chapter 1 . 9/20/2016
Amy the pink stalker :) That was funny and it's true :)
Off to a great start and I'm sure I'll enjoy the rest.
Lynn chapter 5 . 5/12/2016
Well written up the good work. Please continue :).The suspense is killing me...
DeepSeaBlu chapter 1 . 2/26/2016
hOI! This is gonna be the first review I post on this site, but i intend that you read this. :D
Pretty good story line. I will say. BUT. This is meant to be a helpful review unlike most other ones.
This falls in the generic category. Sonic does something that hurts Amy, she runs away, Sonic becomes super worried and calls all his friends to help, Amy gets captured, Eggman wants to use her for experiments. Your grammar isn't bad, so I won't say anything about it. It's probably better than mine.
However, I do see some places where you miss punctuation, but every writer makes mistakes. I've actually signed up to beta so I could even help you! :3 But hey, everyone has their ups and downs, and I hope you take all this into consideration. Other than that, I hope you have a good time on this site, and good day! :) (or night :v)
kkluvzmusic chapter 3 . 2/16/2016
Can u update soon...and like really soon because this story is really good! !
Unknown chapter 2 . 1/27/2016
I like you story. I hope you'll update soon :D
Unknown chapter 2 . 1/26/2016
Yay you updated. I wonder what's going to happen next :D