What am incredible read this was. You have quite the knack for character development and building a compelling world and narrative in your writing!

My only issue with the story is that Emily‘s motivations aren’t completely explained at the end. Also fudge’s actions don’t make sense to me either.

I’m not sure I’m satisfied with the ending and I would’ve hoped that there had been a lot more interaction between Harry and Emily.

Having Martin be the catalyst for Voldemort is an absolutely brilliant plot twist!

While i was enjoying this the ending was too depressing for me, yea I know there’s a sequel but I can’t bring myself to read it.

Thank you for your story.

I really enjoyed the story, I'm interested to see what you're going to do with the sequel. I'm a little surprised I've never read this.

Wth was this chapter? Why would Harry want to see a memory of his future lover Emily losing her virginity? Thats so weird and should definitely affect, if not end, the relationship moving forward. I’m not interested in reading any further, but it seems like nothing in their dynamic would change at all. It was such an interesting story up until now smh

Damn, what an ending. Too bad it was a sad one and now I'm even more depressed, lol. But, by all that's holy, this is one of the best fanfics I've read! Thank you so much.

Oh, god. What the fuck.

I'm really interested if Prewitt killings did not happen in this AU. Because I can't see Ron so accepting of Emily otherwise.

Dumbles called her Ms Riddle? But she was legally married for few years at that point.

What an absolute fricking buffon. Going to a private meeting with a war general holding a precious possession of the general's nemesis.
First his atrocious record at keeping secrets then this, this guy fucks everything up as he goes.

Silly of me to expect him to keep his secrets more than 5 minutes after the vacation. Even if he underwent the mandatory occlumency practices.

Her bday, you insensitive prick.

Fucking mothering hens who treat him as a chicken puppy (or whatever the word English uses) and who cut his comm lines and belittle him "for his own good" so he'll feel guilty if he doesn't agree with accepting that. Is this how old marriages fall apart?