this story is amazing
really hope you continue
this is too good to die

really hope this story continues

I hope you didn’t give up on this story, it’s getting more interesting. I hope you will update it one day. Keep up the good work

Sucks you're so brain dead you can't actually finish a story. Maybe stop writing until you finish them, huh?

Dont downplay orochimaru than snake will crawl out somehow and bite

Naruto is soo fragile? Its kinda weird he gets flustered over stuff i doubt he would and he seem less vocal more timid
I miss his knuckleheadness or brashness why so tame this whole time the fic is been going on

I geniunly dont see what anko can teach naruto in any of these fics that have her as a teacher in one way or another

I have a question. When will we learn more about the silver energy that orphis and grafiya felt within Naruto. You haven’t attention to it yet. I’m excited to see what it is, and if it’s a godly one or a demonic one

I hope you haven't given up on this story, it just keeps getting more and more interesting! Regardless, thank you for writing and I hope you continue to enjoy it.

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Excelente capítulo autor por favor continúa con la historia y historia de Naruto en god of wars se ve excelente voy a pasarme y ver si ya la has publicado o si no con gusto espero que la públiques para disfrutar de leerla

a three way blend of Naruto, god of war and elden ring huh? could be good.

from the missing arm, i am guessing you are using the rasengan chidori clash world hop cliche. but likely the one from the end of the war, right after Kaguya was sealed.

personally i would either have let him keep his arm, or hopefully you will give him a new one further in. either way he will need both arms in that world of gods and monsters. especially as he will REALLY need a proper weapon of some kind. straight fists are not going to be very effective against many of the opponents in god of war.

but with Ranni there, and as the main paring, you do open the way for Naruto to gain a very POTENT weapon. the Dark Moon Greatsword.

never got it myself, but hopefully that will change on my current run in Elden Ring.

mostly using the Bastard Sword as my main weapon right now. i have a couple Katana's as my back up options.

went with Samurai as my starting class, so i got Dual Uchigatana's VERY early into my playthrough.

but yeah, all in all, i am actually VERY interested in that fic, and i look forwards to you eventually posting it.

and as always

thank you for your time,

Okay. I will start with some praise. The first chapter was amazing and the initial idea is really tempting. The writing quality is also good.

But...

Other than the initial idea, the plot is basically garbage. The author clearly has no idea how to write an interesting fanfiction. Don't get me wrong. There will be people who will enjoy reading this. Maybe you will too. But my point is, with this kind of initial idea, the plot could have been many times more exciting. The things the author could have done are practically limitless with Grayfia deciding to be Naruto's maid and help him become a good ninja.

Instead, we have some cheap BS like Naruto dealing with his women trauma. Reading that was just so obnoxious and uninteresting. I don't read fanfic to see some trauma Bs. I especially did not open a fanfic that advertised itself as 'Grayfia in Narutoverse as Naruto's maid' to read about BS trauma. It felt like some stupid clickbait.

Then there was the whole Land of Moon mission. Which was okay enough. I just didn't like how much the author nerfed Grayfia. Grayfia should be capable of freezing the entire country. Yet, here she struggles after creating one freaking bridge made of ice. It's just stupid. Even if the author nerfed her and made her only as strong as Kage, then one bridge still should be no problem for her. It was pathetic writing.

The whole Ty Lee plot... I don't give a shit about it. AGAIN. This is a recurrent theme in the plot of this author. I simply can't bring myself to give a shit about it because he writes about uninteresting stupid shit.

Then there was the Ophis plot... I guess that was alright? It was not exactly exciting or interesting. Not even the fight between Orochimaru and Grayfia was very interesting. The dialogue was positively childish and painful to read. These people are supposed to be powerhouses yet they talk like 5 yo children fighting over a toy. Ugh.

You know when people say that a story hit the spot just right? Well, this one misses every spot by a mile. It is still good for a causal read. But it could have been so much better it is not even funny.

I will end my complaints here. I don't really mean this as flaming the author. I just tried to portray why I think he failed to deliver an interesting story despite having a great initial premise. He did not focus on the initial idea and developing his MC, Grayfia, and their relationship. Instead, he went ahead to write a bunch of trash plotlines that were boring and unnecessary, completely neglecting Naruto's development as a ninja and things that most readers are actually interested in reading about when they read Naruto fanfic.

Sigh. Have a nice day.

Really enjoyed reading this. Hope you will update soon

Ante todo un saludo espero que estés bien hace tiempo que dejé de leer esto solo me faltaban estos capítulos sabes el 11 y el 12 pero muy buena historia te lo digo vale la pena esperar a que se publique muy buena y hablando de la historia de opis me imagino a Naruto como un Buda verdadero sabes alguien que ha visto el sufrimiento el dolor la oscuridad del corazón y se ha aceptado esa oscuridad y ha llegado a la iluminación misma a una edad muy temprana y is imagínate sería guay verá una opis siendo guiada por un joven Naruto alegre vivas pero que sabe que es bueno que es malo y lo acepta le enseña a vivir hombre sí ya me interesaba ya me interesó sí haz un opis por Naruto por favor te lo pido porfi porfi porfi porfi porfi porfi porfi porfi porfi porfi porfi porfi porfi porfi porfi porfi porfi je je je je je je no hombre estoy bromeando gracias sí una gran historia un saludo desde Madrid España que es este con buena salud que te vaya bien en el trabajo que tengas prosperidad adiós