|Reviews for A Sun's Devilish Maid|
| Danny R Williams chapter 12 . 9/14
Another great story that has plenty of action and humor.
Story just needs several updates to bring it to it's full glory.
| Danny R Williams chapter 12 . 9/5
A great story with plentyof action, suspense and humor
Story needs updates to complete this story.
| Kamikimi chapter 12 . 8/20
I'm catching up, with the stories I have to read. And certainly this is one of my favorites.
The change you have made in the events is great, Sasuke's fight with Neji was great. And the fact that new jutsus are being introduced is great.
Also the introduction of the 3 Chimeras and their fighting style was great. Certainly the match between Naruto and Gaara will be epic.
And this time I can't think of how the Third could die, so it will be interesting to see how you approach that fight.
And as for the final extract of the story that you could create, it would certainly be something very interesting. Certainly Kratos's patience would have to be infinite, if he doesn't smash Naruto's face in.
This is a cool story. Keep it up!
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/14
I hope Jiraiya doesn't act like this the whole time because it's annoying and cliche. Plus, no point in Naruto going with him for training, especially if he's gonna act like that the whole time in every chapter he shows up on along with Grayfia. Hell, I honestly hope that Naruto threatens him to make him stop perving on her
| Raiden1678 chapter 12 . 8/15
| ozzie98632 chapter 12 . 8/6
Do you have a plan to seal Kaguya with him losing the sun mark by recieving his new arm? Love this story btw!
| Spacecore94 chapter 12 . 6/27
That was bloody wholesome and I will now ship Kurama and Lee
I want to see this GoW d
Elden Ring fic
would it be a single pairing? just curious. I'd eat it up regardless
| Ryuujin96 chapter 12 . 6/25
Awesome work on this story and on thus chapter. And with how you're doing the Naruto/Ophis interactions in this story, I'm kind of sad that this is a locked in single pairing Naruto/Grayfia story. So I hope that the Naruto/ Ophis story sees the light of day at some point. I did like that Ophis helped Naruto though.
| World War Wolf chapter 12 . 6/24
can't wait for the next chapter
| Grimfireshot chapter 12 . 6/12
can't wait to read more of this is really well done I hope you continue and I wonder what is going to happen in The invasion part
| Regtech chapter 8 . 5/31
Dont really know what to feel about an Ophis, wou is capable of holding a conversation woth long sentences. It just feels llain weird.
| Regtech chapter 7 . 5/31
Ophis came to the Naruto verse? Damn. Guess kurama got to learn to play ball and black zetsu and madara better shut up
| Regtech chapter 6 . 5/31
Naruto and Grayfia cementing their relationship? Cheers! How you handled Kurama and made him speak so much early on? Ney. The reasoning was kinda meh. While Kushina and her puberty infused love life thoughts did annoy the kyuubi. I kinda feel like his resentment should have made him just clamp up like the OG kyuubi did.
Guess things have just been moving so fast and this is an AU, so oh well
| Regtech chapter 5 . 5/31
I know using the shadow clone cheat usually ruins some stories because of the OPness of it, but one can always hope. But he needs to either meet up with Yamato or come to terms with the kyuubi
| Regtech chapter 4 . 5/31
Love how the story is going and im happy to see that this is gokng to be a single pairing. While 2 girls could work, rhe dynamic, complexity and time need to develop your characters would require far more work.
I usually notice the writting quality is generally better with single pair romances.