Reviews for A Sun's Devilish Maid |
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Trace Reading chapter 4 . 4/28/2023 Higurashi again. Does no-one have an original thought? Every time I see that name I half expect the story to turn into a stealth Inuyasha crossover. |
TheSlySage chapter 1 . 4/28/2023 imma reread this tomorrow lol cuz I have no idea where we are its been so long lol love ya pain |
Alim fanficker1 chapter 12 . 4/27/2023 how long for waiting next 5 years |
thunderofdeath97 chapter 12 . 4/27/2023 If he has Ophis' endless potential/power/etc. Does this mean Naruto's stamina is endless? It's a shame that Kurama is a male in this, Naruto x Grayfia x Kurama (female) would have been interesting, lol Hm interested to see how this goes from here. I don't see Orochimaru as living past this. |
hellfire45 chapter 12 . 4/27/2023 Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next and that is definitely a interesting idea at the end there |
AlgusSadalfas chapter 12 . 4/27/2023 Glad to see you returned and that you updated the story that, if I remember correctly, introduced me to your works. Good times. Here’s hoping for an update to Sackcloth and Ashes as well as the reading version of it since I really like those two a lot. |
Nikkless chapter 11 . 4/27/2023 so naruto didint meet Jiraiya or Konohamaru at all |
hqjkat chapter 12 . 4/27/2023 i am so glad this is not dropped. thank you for the update. once again a lovely story. |
Nikkless chapter 10 . 4/27/2023 so some oc characters |
amavgupta0 chapter 2 . 4/26/2023 Bro that’s the most stupid ideology I’ve ever heard yellow and red makes orange so I will never drop orange just excellent if all the orphans of the world thought like that it would have been the end of the world and trust me ikr how orphans think i served in a Indian ashram for orphans for 3 years ikr how they think your logic is stupid and Naruto for all purposes is stupid I don’t see development all I see is a child with an unhealthy obsession for orange and when he gets to know his mom liked ramen then he will be like I will only eat ramen forever just wow |
amavgupta0 chapter 2 . 4/26/2023 How is orange a symbol for representing his parents just wow that’s stupid why don’t people just realize Naruto has a strange obsession with orange instead of putting out stupid reasons |
amavgupta0 chapter 1 . 4/26/2023 Bro really he accomplished the jutsu on his first try yeah why not it’s not a b or A rank jutsu it’s a E rank jutsu which can be learned by anybody without even a demonstration from just reading it in a scroll just why no nothing learning how to mold the chakra and produce a solid copy which makes you think why didn’t the other villages never figured out how to make the shadow clone jutsu if IT IS So EASYYyYyYyY |
Haseo187 chapter 12 . 4/26/2023 This was a really good chapter and I hope you keep up the good work I can't wait to read what happens next! |
zx20000006 chapter 12 . 4/26/2023 the Raikage was too nice and friendly which is weird especially if you consider the Hyuga incident and hiruzen bragging about naruto wanting to restore the uzumaki clan in konoha was a stupid idea does he want to paint an even bigger target on naruto's back especially considering Kumo tried to kidnap Kushina in the past and how is the Raikage not bothered by this does he not know how terrifying the Uzumaki clan can be if given a chance to grow?. Sasuke is way smarter and less edgy than canon which is not a bad thing but the problem is that there is no reason for him to improve like this it feels kind random if anything you would think that him being stuck with sakura and sai would make him much worse without naruto to buffer his darkness with attempts of friendship and rivalry. and finally naruto has had it too easy in the leaf village there is no antagonist for him in the village (like sasuke in canon and the civilian council in other fanfictions), honestly if it weren't for naruto's relationship with Grayfia and the prospect of naruto being a badass with fuinjutsu like his clan and parents this story would be very boring. the rookie 12's reaction to naruto's changes as well as the fact that he has a sexy maid and clan head status is very underwhelming where is the jealousy, anger , confusion, conflict I wanted to see naruto rubbing his improvements and new friends in his former classmates' faces the only drama this story has is in naruto's relationship with his maid which should be the talk of the village by the way; I mean come on! the most hated person in the village suddenly became a clan head, has a sexy maid/girlfriend and anew house how is this not raising questions and concerns (even if they would be idiotic) from the villagers and the people who Knew naruto in the academy days? Despite all that I still like this story so please don't abandon it and update for frequently everything above were just my opinions on points to improve in the story |
KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 12 . 4/26/2023 Sweet fights. The Beast ninja are interesting as well. Sweet chapter. |