Reviews for The true heir of Salazar Slytherin
Alice Scarlett Knabel chapter 13 . 9/13
I'm enjoying secret agent slytherin
JeantineShipper chapter 8 . 8/22
Hello author of this wonderful fanfiction!
I am just helpfully pointing out a mistake that you made on chapter 8: you called the card a “credit card”, but here’s the difference between a credit card and a debit card—-a credit card is when you borrow money from a credit company, use their money to purchase things and pay back the loan in full every month, but a debit card is when you use the money in your checking account to make purchases or withdraw money from an ATM and it’s linked. So in the case of Hadrian’s blood being linked to a card that Gringotts gave him to withdraw money out of his vaults: thus it’s a debit card.
Hope this helps,
XD Christine Fauchvelent
AQUA FIRE PHOENIX chapter 34 . 7/17
Loved the story. waiting to read more
Angela Kleine chapter 33 . 5/27
'Some were worried about Hadrian, mainly the Slytherins but also the leaders of the other houses as well as the Weasley twins. The latter pestered him on a daily basis about whether he has heard any news from Hadrian.' I would like to comment on this that maybe Ginny Weasley might not be the only Weasley in love with Harry.
Angela Kleine chapter 34 . 5/26
I have read this book on Wattpad, AO3 and now on Fanfiction and honestly I have never seen any book better than this one in my entirety of reading fanfiction in general, but I noticed the problems in this. You while I admit you are a fantastic writer and really know how to draw a person into a story haven't updated the story since 2020. I know better than most people that sometimes inspiration just fails you after a extended period of time, but I also know that getting feedback by people that care about your story in general really boosts confidence in writing even if it is by obligation only. I understand that inspiration fails but maybe duty won't and much like the title says nothing comes for free, not even dedication to do what is necessary to society like taking care of family and friends during hard times. I hope personally that you never give up. If you want to talk my user on Wattpad is Ravenclawtraveler
Guest chapter 34 . 5/24
You to countinue
wiebenor chapter 34 . 4/11
F*** me... Sorry about the swearing but damn... Another story I've read these past few days that isn't finished... While I will say that Hermione is missing for the last or so of the story, which would normally be a bad thing, if she wasn't dead, she was referred to on 1 or 2 occasions with terms similar to "supposedly dead", which leads the reader to believe that she's not as dead as some people would think. She then miraculously wakes up in Dumbledore's clutches right before the end of the last uploaded chapter...

I guess what I'm saying, is that I really liked the story so far, but I hope that the story has not been abandoned as of yet, and I would urge the author to continue as I do like the story and we do need more background on Hermione's survival and Dumbledore's plots...

Thank you for writing such a good story(good so far), and I will follow the story in case you decide to finish it or continue it, so I can read more
Gear master chapter 24 . 2/28
I don’t know why you stop this story man
Seimika chapter 34 . 1/22
So soul magic to revive either granger or someone who was a drone for dumble bee
Seimika chapter 21 . 1/21
So could his parents come back as imprinted portraits of themselves?
WeisseHex chapter 18 . 11/27/2022
Oh this is gonna be GOOD!
WeisseHex chapter 10 . 11/27/2022
I think it would be great if Salazar could heal the Longbottoms; for Hadrian it would be awesome because of Neville.
MerlinTheArchmage chapter 34 . 9/29/2022
Guest chapter 34 . 9/11/2022
Love love love this story. Maybe look back on the earlier chapters? It reads as 2 different Suthers with so many grammatical and speech errors in earlier chapters. It reads as if they are from a different country talking to high class British people at time. It’s very confusing when they’re supposed to be from the same country. . Otherwise a very good story. I can’t wait for your next update.
kittyranma chapter 34 . 9/5/2022
Oh my, I hope it's Hermione. At first I was hoping Hermione would be the heir to Ravenclaw, but now I hope it's Luna.
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