Reviews for Kyuubi's Champion
Chungas chapter 4 . 9/21
You wrote a lemon while they were in a flower shop...
Chungas chapter 2 . 9/21
That was the weirdest lemon I've ever read
Tenjo chapter 6 . 9/13
Hinata’s body reminds me of a friend I had in school.. she was slim and had no curves, but because she had large breasts people said she had a hot body. Her tits were nice and oddly firm despite their size, but I’ve always preferred proportionality over size so I thought she (and Hinata) looked weird. It’s kinda like seeing a gym junkie who only works out his upper body; it just looks unnatural.
Tenjo chapter 1 . 9/13
Not an issue with the story, but can someone PLEASE come up with a more original metaphor than the scroll and kunai? Nearly every story where Naruto meets Kurama early does it, as well as some others.
raelarial1 chapter 8 . 5/20
wish there was some titfucking in this story
Yoko chapter 10 . 5/1
John chapter 12 . 2/17
Fuck you this was an amazing fanfiction and you stopped it your gay for stopping it
Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2019
Yeah getting good
Borello chapter 12 . 10/12/2019
damnit. the story is really interesting. i hoped to read more chapter.
Fanfic9000 chapter 12 . 9/25/2019
This story was doing amazing, it's a shame that you have to put it down. Thank you for writing such a great fanfiction.
Hchfjc chapter 6 . 8/6/2019
Why da fuck does yoko say heh every fuckin time I just don't kfjfjfjfj knososodkdkdkckckc
ShadowElf1991 chapter 12 . 5/24/2019
Sorry for all ur going through but thanks for the story it was really good
Guest chapter 12 . 5/21/2019
Sorry for what happened but that you for the smut
AnkoUzumaki chapter 12 . 1/15/2019
It's a shame that you stopped writing I enjoyed reading it and would have liked to know what happens
lavi-kitsune chapter 12 . 12/15/2018
That's a shame. I would have continued to read to the end
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