Reviews for Reborn as Issei
Destrark chapter 3 . 5/1/2019
I was thinking Kakashi not Sakumo. Nice surprise.
Sagar Kumar1 chapter 1 . 3/26/2019
plese update
Guest chapter 12 . 12/9/2018
And you put her into Asia of all people.

Super disappointed with this story. Not only do you bring in the old love interest from another world and put her into the least attractive character in the series, you spend 93k words describing the adventures of the "World's Biggest Pervert" and all he manages is a chaste kiss.

It's so utterly childish.
Guest chapter 10 . 12/9/2018
So BOTH Vali and Azazel are people from the other world, too.

It really just starts making the original universe dull and almost pointless. It's so clear what kind of immense advantage these travelers have. Issei, who barely even trained since getting his new body, absolutely curbstomped Riser without even properly using his Boosted Gear. Saji is also similarly ridiculously overpowered.

It creates an imbalance that really messes up the story. If it is just one character, it can be excused, but throwing them in in multiple places like this will not only negate the original character from this universe, it will destroy the whole power system.

Of course, these are your creative decisions to make, but my opinion is that you messed up.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/9/2018
You're getting lost in the unrealistic, childish antics of a "Super Pervert" to the point that it has completely taken over the story. It was a drag in canon and it is a drag now.
Guest chapter 3 . 12/9/2018
Really hope you don't keep doing this, merging characters together. One is fine. Two is already pushing it. More will ruin the story.
FinzDragzer chapter 12 . 12/10/2018
why no more update !
Arfah Indo chapter 2 . 12/3/2018
wojohohooho
Firefly9202002 chapter 2 . 11/14/2018
Jiraiya could still learn Sage Mode. Hell he could learn and master it to the level Naruto did now that he can start mastering it at a younger age. All he has to do is reach his previous chakra level then connect to the Nature Chakra of the DxD Earth. The fact is him working his way up to it would help him seem not OP right from the instant he gains his memories back.
marquis.shax chapter 12 . 11/12/2018
hmm it's clear that Asia is also Tsunade but is it that she's got brief memories of the previous life but not everything kind of like Issei before he was reincarnated?
marquis.shax chapter 11 . 11/12/2018
hmm interesting very very interesting it seems Tsunade has been somehow reincarnated as Asia it's to bad you're only bringing in the older generation an not say Naruto an Sasuke. Honestly aside from one story that has a decent plot to it I've honestly never seen a story where Naruto is the Jubi jinchuriki (or at least a pseudo jubi jinchuriki as in in canon) combined with Naruto having the boosted gear an I think that would be incredible but maybe to god like lol.
marquis.shax chapter 8 . 11/12/2018
you know I'm still wondering when the fuck someone is going to point out to Kiba that hating an INANIMATE object is just plain fucking stupid an rather he should hate the people who put him through that shit like Valper and whoever else was there NOT Excalibur lol
Super98 chapter 12 . 10/28/2018
Awesome, we need more Jiraiya stories!
Eddyg125 chapter 1 . 10/1/2018
Keep 'er going!
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