Reviews for Separation of High Schools |
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pipabeth chapter 3 . 8/11 this is an amazing chapter. genuinly |
Guest chapter 9 . 9/2/2023 noooooooo plassssssswsssssssss update i beg u |
BLALHHHH chapter 1 . 9/1/2023 omg i loveeeee it girl slayyyyy |
Destiny Harris chapter 7 . 10/5/2020 I love it so far |
Guest chapter 9 . 8/5/2020 I. NEED. AN. UPDATE. RIGHT. THIS. INSTANT. please z |
matrii chapter 9 . 5/19/2019 om omgmgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg wut will happenn? |
Ava chapter 9 . 1/16/2019 Update |
Livvi May chapter 9 . 10/13/2018 Your writing style hasn't changed, but you've definitely improved. This is really good, actually. Only thing I would day is make other characters more involved, and add details. Like you get a pretty good idea of what's going on, but is Piper's house huge compared to Jason's? Does he notice that silver chandelier on the ceiling? Does he notice that there is literally an entire BOOKSHELF of movies? Currently, they all about as observant as a brick wall. Make sure there are DETAILS. You want to live in this story, not just read it. Some of the characters (namely Annabeth, Percy) are a little out of character. Make sure they still have their personality! Amazing job over all! I really like this. |
LovesUnicorns10 chapter 9 . 6/5/2018 I love this series, it's one of my favorite Jasper fanfictions. PLEASE continue, can't wait for the next -LovesUnicorns10 :) |
Aerinia chapter 8 . 2/7/2018 Maybe you should add another love interest for one of the main characters (Piper or Jason). After they are dating already of course... Just to add something to it. |
Aerinia chapter 9 . 1/28/2018 Geat story! Just read it today. PLEASE upsate soon! |
HuffleHecate chapter 9 . 1/9/2018 Great story! I can’t wait to see what will happen. Also, maybe some other ships too? Keep on writing! |
Dreamuero chapter 9 . 1/8/2018 great job! excited to see you back! |
daya.y chapter 8 . 1/6/2018 update from 2018 |
Jaehyun's.Side.Hoe chapter 1 . 3/30/2017 I really want you to update your story because this is just too good to stop |