Good chapter! Now begins the effort to help Callen by the team. Even if it is unofficial. Great plan from Granger! He is starting to be a team player. Hetty obviously knows where he is and will be the first to try and help him. Very exciting and tense! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Like I mentioned yesterday, I love this story (also in German!). Very curious if Sam can find any hidden clue on Callen's laptop...

I think what makes this story so disconcerting is Callen has not be introduced into the story line except for the brief video clip. At this point we have no details as to his well-being; thank goodness he has his team, and Granger, to help. Absolutely brilliant!

I feel sad for Christin. It will be difficult when she finds out he left without telling her this time about the why...
Sure, he does it to protect her, but it will hurt anyway.

We learn a little more of the mystery that is the disappearance of special Agent Callen. We have more information about Christin and how she met Callen, and we know that Callen is searching for information about his past. However, Callen is in danger. The team is ready to help find him, but where to start? Looking forward to the next chapter.

I really love the storyline, you write about so many details, when I read it feels like I watch it on TV! Great work! I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep going..

I love the storyline. The wording is a bit choppy but otherwise...I look forward to a new chapter. You have me hooked.

A good second chapter. We have added a new character and we now are ready to begin the investigation. Callen was being Callen which got him into this mess, but the rest of the team will now prove their loyalty again. Exciting events! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Ich lese auch gerne auf Englisch weiter ;-))

This was a very intense chapter! It kept me on the edge of my seat so to speak...I can't wait for Chapter 3!

This is an interesting turn of events ... Christine?! The adventure continues and I can not wait. Great story line and we haven't event gotten Callen's point of view.

Wow.
Of course they cannot let this go, where-ever Callen is, I hope they'll find him in time. Love to see where this story takes us.

A good start to this story, right into the thick of action! Wonder what Callen has found out that brought him into this situation...

The beginning of a great story! This will be a team effort and a difficult one. Looking forward to more as the NCISLA team works as a family to find the missing Callen.

This chapter is just like watching the series. Everything that you had put in for their standing upto Hatti like that is just the way i would count on them doing. I really enjoyed it. Thank you!